Saturday, August 28, 2010

Osa Bella - Chapter 30 "Lobo Rey" [Twilight FanFiction]



Hi! As per TexasKatherine, this is now officially the chapter where Edward and Bella go off to Reckoner and have wild monkey sex for about 17,000 words and then sail off into the sunset and THE END! Or it will be as soon as I come back and revise it a little. Love ya!

Here's your .pdf!


xo,
Myg


CHAPTER 30

Lobo Rey

All the leaves, the bark of the trees, the underbrush, and the air swirled around me, invaded me. The intense pain from my broken bones made speech nearly impossible. All I could do was will my heart not to stop. I felt like I was bleeding internally again, like I had become nothing but blood and dust all mingled inside a sack of flesh and that there was just no way my form was going to hold. I was withering, right there in Edward's arms as he ran faster, now faster again to the north.

Behind us I heard more bears, and then more, rolling up on us like a thunderhead. Edward was fast, but carrying me in his arms slowed him down. I thought he should leave me behind and save himself. Maybe the bears would spare me, but I knew if they caught us they'd never spare him. I prayed that Edward might hear my thoughts, but if he did he said nothing. I couldn't hear his, though I could guess what they were—don't die, Bella.

"Come on, Bella," he said, as I felt my pulse grow fainter. "Stay with me. Please."

"It's Edward! He's got her," I heard Emmett's voice, booming from a distance. "They're headed north."

"Run!" Edward yelled. "Don't follow. We're outnumbered."

But no sooner had Edward said it than I could sense the presence of the Cullens, a cold blast of air coming toward us from the east. "We can't fight them off," Edward called out to them. "There are too many. We have to run."

"They're catching up, Edward," Emmett called, now closing in on us as we continued our race to the north. "We're going to have to fight."

"How many vampires do we have?"

"Twenty," I heard Carlisle's normally cool voice strained. "But the others have to find us. They were all tracking to the east of here."

"There are nearly twice that many bears following now," Jasper said. "If we fight before too many more arrive we have a chance."

"She's fading, Carlisle," Edward said, his voice pained.

"Stop here and change her and we'll fight them," Emmett said. "Don't take the chance. We'll defend her."

"If we're defeated and she stays human she has a chance. If I change her they'll destroy her with the rest of us."

"We have to fight," Emmett said, jumping over the trunk of a downed tree.

"They're getting closer," I heard Rosalie say from a little further behind. "What's the plan?"

"Keep running," Edward said. "Run until we have no choice. Where are Alice and Esme?"

"Searching for the others," Carlisle said.

And so we all continued to run through the forest together, Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie behind us in a defensive line. We ran so fast that I could hear the trees moaning as we passed. The trampling of the undergrowth, the scampering away of wildlife felt like a runaway forest fire was coming through, and we were the beacons of its destruction.

"They're too close," Rosalie said, a little panicky. "Emmett, they're too close."

Then like a wave breaking on a rocky shoreline, the bears were upon us. I quailed as I realized just how many there were. Bears were everywhere.

"Make a perimeter around Bella," Carlisle yelled. And I saw Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie wheel about us, forming a protective circle.

Edward looked at me with grief in his eyes. "Carlisle!" Edward yelled, checking my vitals.  Carlisle was at my side in an instant.

I heard a sound like a boulder crashing to the ground. "Emmett!" Rosalie screamed as a bear knocked her off her feet. Emmett gave a terrifying roar as he and Edward leaped to her aid.

"Don't let two of them get hold of you at the same time," Jasper shouted. "Evade! Evade!"

"Keep breathing, Bella," Carlisle said to me, gently straightening my limbs as he crouched protectively over me. I cried out in agony as he aligned my arms, my legs, my neck. Behind us I heard trees being broken, the sharp sound of kicks, punches, bodies colliding and the intermingled grunts and moans of pain from the battle steps away. "You can heal," Carlisle said, insistently, commanding me with his eyes. "I've seen you do it before. Concentrate."

"Don't let me die," I said, tears in my eyes. "Turn me, Carlisle. Please turn me before its too late."

"You'll be too vulnerable," he said. "Edward is right. Your hope now is to stay human."

"Don't let me die. Please don't let me die."

"I swear to you I won't, Bella," he said. "Just breathe. You've got to concentrate."

I tried to do as he directed, tried to will my mind to heal my body by concentrating on my breath and the warmth of the daylight. I tried to block out the terror that took place just steps away and think about the light. I sent heat into every part of me and then I could feel it—healing energy. It was still painful, but I could also sense that I was coming back together. I would be whole again. I would be whole. I fucking insisted I would be whole. For him.

"Edward, over here!" Jasper called, and then there was the sound of breaking bones and the agonized cries of a gravely injured beast.

"Don't drink their blood," Edward yelled. "You'll get distracted."

I turned my head and saw Alice and Esme run up to us with Tanya, Peter and six other vampires from the party.

"They're all we could find," Alice said to Carlisle. "We can't last very long out here," she said.

"We've got to run," Tanya said. "It's our only chance."

"We can't outrun them now," Carlisle said getting to his feet.

"Leave me," I said. "Save yourselves. You can't let yourselves be destroyed out here."

"Oh God, Jasper," cried Alice. She ran to where Emmett and Edward were pulling a bear off of Jasper while another pawed at his legs. With a ferocious howl, Alice nearly severed the bear's head with a sharp blow and a tearing bite. But as fast as the bear was dispatched, two more closed in on her. Esme flew at them, a mother enraged.

"We're not leaving you here, Bella," Carlisle said. "Tanya, stay with Bella until I can get Edward out of there. If we can give them more of a head start then we can disperse and lead them away."

Carlisle leaped onto the back of a large bear headed for Esme and jerked its head to the side, snapping its neck.

There was a loud, crackling sound that I thought might be thunder from a coming storm, but it was a tree breaking in half as Emmett was thrown into it by two bears. It was falling right toward me, but Tanya caught it and pulled it to the side at the last moment. A bear charged us and reared on its hind legs over me, and I braced myself to be crushed under its weight. Then Edward roared as he tackled it. He sank his teeth into its leg and I watched a river of bright red blood arc into the air as he let go. He came to my side. "I've got to get you out of here," he said. "How much pain are you in now? Can I move you?"

"Your family," I said. "They can't hold out against so many."

"We'll all run together. We've got to get to the water—we have the advantage there. Are you strong enough to ride on my back?"

"If you bite me but just inject me with a trace of your venom, won't I get a boost?"

"I can't risk doing that here, Bella," he said. "Not now."

"Okay, carry me on your back," I said. He helped me sit up. I moaned in pain, but I at least I now had the strength to sit. Tanya stood before us, protectively as the rest of the vampires continued to fight the bears several feet away. Two bears emerged from the underbrush and took us by surprise. One jumped on Edward and tumbled with him, carrying him several yards away. Tanya pulled the bear off of Edward, only to be pinned by the other, whose massive jaws clamped down on her thigh.

"No!" Edward yelled. There was a horrifying squeal, like metal plates being torn apart, as the bear ripped Tanya's leg off. Edward grabbed the bear's head by the ears and smashed it into a large rock. But as he did, the first bear began to twist Tanya's head off.

"No!" I screamed. "No!"

Tanya's arms began to flail and her face cracked like dry earth in the hot sun until her body stopped moving. Edward flew onto the bear's back and crushed its skull. Another bear leaped over them and came straight toward me. Edward charged it and threw it into a tree.

"We're not going to make it," Rosalie cried. "We're not going to make it!" Edward gave her a desperate look and I felt hope retreat.

And then I heard it, along with everyone else. The fighting paused for a beat as we all registered the distant howling, eerie and foreboding. Jake.

"The wolves are coming," I said.

The howl grew louder, siren-like, more terrifying as it drew as it near. The other vampires looked frightened as they heard it, as if they all recognized that this was the war cry of Jacob Black, legendary vampire hunter.

"We've got to run!" Peter cried. "It's the wolves—we're done for."

Then I heard Emmet yell, "Edward look out!" Three bears attacked Edward as he was distracted by the noise, one pulling on his arm, another his legs.

"Edward!" I screamed.

Carlisle jumped on one of the bears and fought to pull it away. Edward broke free but then two more bears turned on Carlisle, one trapping him against the trunk of a tree while the other grabbed his neck in his jaws and began to crush it. Edward was fighting off two more bears as the other vampires continued defending.

Then with the force of a tornado, the wolves came pounding in, fur bristling, teeth bared. Jake was out in front, now larger than the largest bear among them. He ran to Carlisle and bared his teeth at the bears who held him as the other wolves lined up behind him. Jake growled and snarled and the pack followed suit, pushing the bears back as the vampires took cover behind the wolves. Carlisle realigned his own neck, still somewhat dazed and then stood up and said, "Thank you, Jacob."

"What the hell is going on?" I asked.

"He's getting the bears to stand down," Edward said, coming over to me. And it was true, the bears had stopped their attack. The silence of the woods seemed to swell as the melee subsided.

Then Edward turned sharply to Jake, as though he'd been asked a very hostile question. "Yes," Edward said. "But it would have killed her—and me. I had no choice." Jake growled viciously at him.

"What is it?" Carlisle said.

"The kermode bear that I killed at Lake Crescent," Edward said, now distraught. "Jacob says it was their spirit guardian. They believe she was their direct link to the next world."

"Oh, my God," Carlisle said. "Edward—no wonder you were so affected by its blood."

"It's worse," Edward said. "One of the bears saw Bella run from me when I killed her—they think Bella is her, phased into human form."

"What does that mean?" I asked.

"They think I've stolen you from them."

"But they're wrong," I said. "We have to tell them. Jake, you have to tell them."

"This is very primitive communication, Bella…" Edward put his face in his hands briefly, then looked up at me. "Jake got this information from someone—some translator—back at La Push."

"Jake," I said. "You have to tell them I'm not her."

"He can't explain anything to them right now," Edward said, looking ill. "Bella—they think you're Jacob's mate. He told them you were marrying him so they would bring you back to La Push. That's probably what the tribe was doing when I found you."

"What? No," I said. "No."

Jake turned and came to where we were. He walked up to Edward and drove him several steps back from me with his head. I expected Edward to argue or push back, but I could see him restraining himself and backing off. Then Jacob came to where I sat on the ground and stood over me, protectively.

"No!" I said to Jacob.

"Bella," Edward said. "Jacob can't keep the bears from attacking unless they believe you're going to marry him and unify the two tribes. They believe he's going to be your husband and their king."

"Tell them no," I said. "It's not true."

"Jacob," Edward said. "You need to phase and explain it to her."

Jake arched his neck over me, possessively. The bears backed further away, cautiously as the rest of the wolves closed the circle around the vampires who stood near us. Jake phased and crouched over me, naked. I began to cry.

"What the fuck did you do?" I yelled at him.

"What the fuck did I do?" he said, furious. "What did I do? I just saved your fucking blood suckers, that's what I did. And you're welcome."

"Don't be an asshole," Edward said. "She's in a lot of pain."

"What the hell happened to her?"

"I fell out of a tree," I said.

Jake shook his head at me. "Why didn't you tell me what he did?" he demanded. "Do you have any idea the consequences of this?"

"How the hell could we know that?" I yelled back.

“Do you understand how evil an act it is to slaughter and drink the blood of a spirit animal? Do you know how lost these beings are now? They will never stop hunting you.”

“Explain that they’re wrong,” I said. “I’m not some spirit animal, or whatever the hell they think I am."

“Yes, I can see that,” he said. “But that doesn’t mean they will.”

“So what the hell am I going to do?”

"You're going to marry me," he said. "Or else they're going to take you back into the forest and wait for you to phase into a bear and I have no idea what they'll do to you once they figure out that you're not her."

"What about Edward? What about the Cullens?"

"They'll kill them and I can't do anything about it unless the Ani Tsa gu hi believe I'm going to be their leader. The only way I can do that is if you marry me."

"Edward?" I said, desperate. "What do I do?"

"You're going to ask him?" Jake said, furious. "After what he's done?"

"Bella," Edward said. "It's okay."

"It's not okay," I said, crying. "They can't kill you. I can't handle that."

Edward moved to comfort me but Jake glared at him.

"Don't come anywhere near her if you want to live," he said, and as he spoke, I noticed the bears back on their haunches again, ready to attack. Edward stood still, his eyes pained as he looked at me.

Sometimes in the face impossible circumstances, you begin to understand that your will and your desires mean nothing in the face of your destiny—they are only agonies burdening you on the path to the inevitable.

I recalled vividly that night at Lake Crescent, when I provoked the spirit bear and Edward killed her to save my life. Now, for this, he would not be mine. I would not be his. But by my own hand in this moment, he would live. That much I could do.

"It's your call, Edward," Carlisle said.

"No," I said. "It's mine."

"Bella," Edward said, looking into my eyes. It was all he had to say. He, too, understood what had to be done.

"Do you promise you can get Edward and his family out of here safely?" I asked Jacob.

"Yes," he said. "I promise."

"Okay," I said. My heart, which had been weakened by my fall from the tree, strained by the coursing adrenaline of my pain, now fell heavy inside of me and broke. "I'll marry you."

I couldn't look at Edward.

"Can you walk?" Jake asked.

"No," I said, my voice cracking.

"Let me examine her and see how far she's healed," Carlisle said. "I can align her again before we leave."

"Don't come near her. You have to leave for the city," Jake said. "Go to the north. My pack will go with you and protect you. We have no idea how many bears are involved but we know it's a lot more than this."

"You'd do that for us?" Jasper asked.

"I'm doing it for Bella," Jake said. My tears fell heavily as the vampires began to move off with the pack.

"Edward," I cried as Jacob lifted me off the ground. Edward reached for me, like he was going to take me right out of Jake's arms, but then stopped himself as the bears growled and shifted toward him.

"For her sake," Jacob said. "Don't get yourself killed."

"We go to Reckoner and sail back to Alaska," Carlisle said. "Without Bella."

I began to take Edward's ring from my finger to return it, but he shook his head at me, very subtly. The bears must have believed the ring was from Jake, I realized. Edward's eyes locked on mine then, like they had so many times before, and he tried to soothe me but I wouldn't allow it. I wanted to stay with the pain of this separation, because it was the part of him I could keep with me. Our silent conversation was only a moment but transmitted an eternity of longing. Our hearts mingled in that desperate space, making their final commitments. Saying their last goodbyes.

And then they were gone.

58 comments:

  1. OH.


    MY.


    GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

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  3. Holy Fucking Shitty McShittenShits Myg & Mr. Myg!

    I need a paper bag to breathe into now.

    I can't believe they think B is the spirit form of the kermode! What is she if she can heal herself?

    Gah! So good! So violent and so so good!

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  4. Must.Not.Panic.

    Must.Trust.Myg.

    Stayed up for update, will now not be able to sleep.

    Myg.Get.Next.Chapter.Soon!

    Arrrggh.

    *grin.lovingthisride*

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  5. As much as there's pain in their hearts, there's trust in mine. Myg will make it all ok, I know she will!

    The big question is, how the hell to stay calm for the next week? xx

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  6. Wait...WHAT?!?!

    What the hell just happened???

    Myg, you're killing me...I like it:-)

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  7. well now, isn't this just...emotional. Wow, where to even begin. I had a feeling about those bears and what they were thinking about Bella. In a way, yes it's her fault and Jake's and Edward's, that all of this is happening but for my own personal sake, I'd like to place all the blame on Jacob. It just feels better to do that.

    I trust you 100%. I know that somehow, they will get out of this so called arranged marraige. Jake can't put her through the real thing knowing that she loves Edward and not him. He just can't. Whether it be so kind of fake ceremony, strickly for the bears to witness, then so be it.

    Regardless, this was a fantastic chapter and I can't wait until next Saturday. Oh wait, how am I going to excuse myself from out of town company that's coming in for the LSU kickoff game? I'll figure something out.

    xoxo
    Holly

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  8. I would say how could you but it is your story to tell. There are reasons for everything and we will I am sure learn your reasons in the coming chapters. I really don't think I should have read this before bed but I am glad I did - even if I do feel exhilarated now and probably won't be able to sleep for a little while. The agony and pain is palpable and while it seems bad, that is just a good indication of a great story and a great writer. Wow, thank you for a incredible and unexpected chapter.

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  9. that was just outta control, roller coaster intense! that fight!! holy hell my heart was in my throat!

    of course you knew that their actions with the white bear would come back and haunt them and now we have to see them make up for that mistake! :(

    so Jake comes through in the end and makes me eat a big ole plate of crow after I wanted to kick him in the nads..ok ok I'm sor- aw forget it!

    gotta believe you've got our backs Myg..so i'm gonna trust you and think happy thoughts!

    xoxo Liz

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  10. A real email from @TexasKatherine, who read this a few days ago:

    What the crap? You're fired. I'm making Derek the spirit guide. He's marrying Jake (in California, natch) & Bella & Edward sail off on Reckoner where they have wild monkey sex all day & night. The End.

    Yes, she actually fired me from Osa Bella. I didn't even know she could do that!

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  11. Myg @TexasKatherine has many and varied talents - we should have warned you LOL!!

    I hire you back!

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  12. I support TexasKatherine. Okay I support you too Myg, but you're killing us. I hope your family stays healthy and free from anything that will keep you from delaying these chapters - because we may go a little bit crazy waiting.

    Great chapter!!

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  13. Gah! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. INTENSE!!! Totally unexpected. I was waiting to read how Edward would turn Bella so this little turn of events was a huge shocker. I should have known it wouldn't be that easy, huh?

    I know I'm a minority here but as incredibly heartbroken as I am for Bella and Edward my heart goes out a bit to Jakey as well. I mean, he knows that Bella doesn't want him so this can't be easy for him either and he truly is a good guy. He is!! I see some of you shaking your heads at me! Let's remember that he just saved the Cullens, shall we? (read: Edward is still around to get Bella back)

    Oh, and killing off Tanya - fuck awesome! In every fanfic I read with her in it I always worry about where she's lurking, ready to pounce on Edward in her usual slutterific way. So, no need to reattach her head, mkay?

    Thanks for another amazing ride, Myg!

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  14. WAIT??? WHAT?? HUH??? WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED HERE??? did i miss the monkey sex?was i just dreaming that i read that somewhere?????? LOL, i just have to say my heart was beating out of my chest the entire chapter!!!!! but....i ....have....FAITH....that .....Myg WILL make it all better!!!!!! thanks for the FUCKAWESOME story!!!!!

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  15. Yay... uh oh... oh no... holy mother of fuck... NOOOOOOOO!

    My exact reaction, according to my husband.

    You know the writing is good when you have to scream outloud!

    Myg. I love you... now please write, write, write your blessed little heart out.

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  16. Ahhh...whiplash....this was a turn I did not expect....at all! Great job...this chapter had my heart racing....I need more!

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  17. @Myg--Why are you still here? This chapter is nothing like the revisions I requested. Have you even been letting the bears sniff Derek's shirt? How will they know his scent when they hunt him? I'm assuming Jacob will be killed off next chapter in some jort related incident. Seriously, you get one more chapter & then I'm changing the Osa Bella locks.

    v/w--engersaw--I don't know what that is, but it better happen to Jake next chapter.

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  18. See it's OK Myg....they trust in you. Such a fucking fantastic chapter. I bow to the writing greatness of Myg.

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  19. I knew what was coming and reading this through again STILL slayed me.

    @TK = lmfao! gotta go power up the engersaw...

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  20. WHAT THE WHAT

    Myg, I'm going to have to join TexasKatherine here and politely request that you GO BACK TO YOUR HOME ON WHORE ISLAND

    Kidding, kidding, kidding of course. This chapter was AWESOME!!!!! The action! The suspense! The heartbreak! What are you doing to me, girl?!

    I will have you know that when..."The fighting paused for a beat as we all registered the distant howling, eerie and foreboding. Jake." I TOTALLY FIST PUMPED. Seriously, no joke, I got up from my chair, jumped up and down, and fist pumped.

    UNTIL YOU PULLED ANOTHER TWIST ON ME, WTH?! Oh, Myg. Myg, Myg, Myg.

    CANNOT WAIT FOR THE REST! I cannot wait to read this thing again from the beginning :-D I bow to your superior awesomeness, darlin'.

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  21. PS @franki, I'm with you! I holds the love in me heart for our Jakey :)

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  22. Holy mother of fuck. Myg - LOVE love love your writing - can't WAIT for another chapter but fuck. Seriously. Fuck. Am I the only girl going to bed a little heartbroken tonight?

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  23. Wow.......

    MYG you slay me and make me want more!

    I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!

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  24. Loved the chapter. Wish it were longer. *Sigh*

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  25. Holy fucking mother of Edward. Is this a fucking joke? A sick twisted joke? Did they change the definition of a lot of words in the dictionary so that this chapter really is the Edward and Bella sail off into the sunset and have lots of monkey sex chapter that texaskatherine described? Because Bella marrying Jake is going to really make it hard for E and B to do the monkey sex...

    Up for grabs...my trust. It's currently with you Myg but if E and B don't get onto Reckoner soon I may consider giving my trust to TK.

    No, really, really, powerful chapter Myg. I cried, mostly because it is exactly what I expected your Bella to do if faced with a decision to either save Edward or have him and she can't do both. She would absolutely save him and sacrifice herself to do it.

    ***crossing fingers and hoping that Edward has a plan***

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  26. Oh no! Myg, you evil thing you! That was painful to read... like, New Moon painful. The translater will be able to help, right? Please, please, puh-lease say the translater can convince them Bellas not a freaky spirit bear.

    Fucking Jacob.

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  27. Fuck, what are you doing to me Myg?!

    I totes trust that it will all work out in the end, but in the meantime: HOLY SHIT!!!

    Well, I guess we have some answers now about the bears.

    I'm hoping this means Bella's injuries are not as bad as I thought, since obviously Edward can't turn her now. At least for awhile.

    And I truly hope you aren't actually planning to subject us to a BxJ wedding. The sex was hard (ha) to stomach, but a wedding would be painful! Poor Edward.

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  28. Please, Myg! Need Reckoner and monkey sex now! Stat! Who gives a flying fuck about the kermode and the spirit bears and Jacob and their needs!

    Seriously, Myg, your twists and turns are so original and merciless. You are a rockin' mistress of ff! Can't wait to see where you take us next week.

    Becca

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  29. Myg!!! I'd duck if I were you too!! But, this lil charlie-foxtrot (clusterfuck) is just going to make us love you more when you fix it.

    uhhh, word verification is humpo *raises eyebrow*

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  30. Wow! I. Am. Died.

    Great chapter Myg! I definitely didn't expect what happened at the end. I have faith in you that E & B's future together is still possible!

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  31. omg, poor edward, poor bella! wtf is jake doing? hope bella and edward will come togehter again. they will, won't they, myg? can't wait for this!

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  32. OMFG MYG, I cant believe you did this to me but I have total faith in you. I know you will do the rigth thing and you will make a way to get B and E back together again. Great chapter and I cant wait til the next chapter. Please Please hurry up with the next chapter, I dont think I can wait another week lol xx

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  33. HOlyfuckingshit, Myyyyyg!!!!!
    I had massive goosebumps when the wolves showed up and got all teary. I'm pretty sure I snapped at my children: "Mommy's READING!!!" I got so caught up in the fight... even more so than when reading about the Vampire Ahhhmy in Eclipse.
    I've been ruined by the media and various books throughout the ages that marriage (sometimes) doesn't really mean shit -- sorry Mr. Shipster-- so I am able to overlook the whole "bonded forever" idea of a marriage between B & J keeping B & E apart. But then I remember that there are a shitload of bears in the Northwest... damn, now THAT's an impediment! Fuck fuck fuck
    Please update on Wednesday. Call in sick. Take me up on my babysitting offers. Don't leave us hanging for a whole week!!!
    Amazing, amazing, amazing...

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  34. WHHAAAATTT?? the..??? OK Myg. Here it is. The ONLY thing that kept me from tossing my monitor at you and stomping out the room is the promise of several more chapters before the "real" end. Ok? Deal? I'm with @TK regarding Derek. Throw his sorry ass to the bears and blame him for all their woes. Jakey had his chance. And I believe like others that deep down he won't force Bella into a "convenient" marriage. I mean, can you imagine her day in and out with a shitload of resentment and evil glares for ruining her life?? (oh wait, some people call that marriage. humm.)
    Edward~ I have faith. Save her, Edward. Soon.

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  35. Holy fucking fuck! I read that whole thing with a look of horror on my face, the boyfriend is now laughing at me. I go on holiday on Wednesday morning, I don't think I can take a whole week not knowing what will happen next. I might have to stop in an internet cafe or something.

    Just promise me it'll be ok? Please...pretty please?

    OB is definitely one of my all time favourite fics, myg you are amazing.

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  36. Oh. My. God. Seriously? This story is awesome sauce. I am on the edge of my seat. Thank you for making Jake a real factor. I couldn't be more dedicated to team Edward, but Jake needs to have a raison d'etre, and your Jake totally does.

    Keep on kicking ass, and write! Write like the wind, Myg!

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  37. Wow. Just wow. I totally didn't expect that to happen, but I guess that's your job right? (that plus giving us fucktastic lemons)

    Ok, so they think Bella's the spirit bear so that answers a lot, but how can she heal herself & why has she seen the vision of the white bear several times?? You are so awesome & I love this story hard. Can't wait until it's finished & go back & re-read all the way through...again. Keep it coming!

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  38. Nooooooooooooooo...what have you done Myg?!!! That was my first screaming thought but now that I've calmed down a bit I know that you'll find a way to make things right!
    Having said that I too am thankful like @ June Velcro - making Jake a real factor.

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  39. Well, just as I was getting ready to settle in for the "event" - Edward changing Bella and the beginning of their life together as immortals and some really hawt fucking monkey sex...you go and take us off in a completely different totally unexpected direction!!!! So, of course, we're all left wondering how the hell is Bella going to get out of having to marry Jacob, cuz surely you're not going to allow that to take place - right? Right??? So does this turn of events mean that you can't possibly wrap this all up in 1 or 2 more chapters and that we're looking at 5, 6 or more? Well, a girl can hope!

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  40. MYG! You MUST finish the next chapter by Wednesday or I'm going to explode. Gah! I almost wish I didn't read it...almost. It's so good but it's such torture! You're ripping our hearts out and stomping on them!

    I think I have an unhealthy addiction to your words :) Thanks for being such a great writer!

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  41. Holy plot twist! You sure know how to keep your readers on the edge of their seats. Almost too much angst for me, I can hardly *bear* it, LOL. At least we know why the bears are acting the way they are towards Bella, but marrying Jake - you better be kidding about that. I'm holding out for the HEA, and confident that you won't disappoint. Waiting anxiously for the next chapter (and hoping you'll update ahead of schedule)

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  42. Gah, nooooooooooooo! For fricks sake, Myg, what are you doing to us?!? I just teared up at my desk. What's going to happen now?!?

    *anxiously and impatiently awaiting the next installment*

    word verif: sumings. I sumings you, Myg to your computer, STAT, to finish the next chapter! Mkay? Thanks.

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  43. WHOOOOORRRRRREEEEE!!!!!!!

    Did that just happen? I mean really. DID THAT JUST FUCKING happen? I knew we were gonna be in rough shape early in the chapter, but I had no clue it would go this route. None. And you had that planned, you scheming, sexy bitch. Thanks for making this even more interesting, Myg.

    And thanks for the new bald spots at the back of my head. I'll try to keep the hair in a baggie for you to have a physical representation of my devotion to you.

    I puffy heart you even when you pull the rug out from under me and I break my ass bone on the fall.

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  44. I love Twitarded readers. So frakking much. All of you. I just heart you all.

    You may or may not know how stupidly nervous I get when I post a chapter in which sucktastic things happen to Bella and Edward. There's always a strong angst that accompanies taking readers you love so much on a rough ride. But you all like it rough, right? I fucking hope so.

    And Lindsay Rae, baby? I just pimped your comment out at Hump Your Readers Wednesday at Twific Pimps, because girl, you really deserve some award for your review skillz. I guess it will be out Wednesday? Not sure how that thing works yet.

    I will have to pimp more of your comments out, because they are so fuckawesome. I am going to have to print them all out and keep them somewhere, like in my super secret special Osa Bella treasure chest under my bed.

    http://www.twificpimps.com/

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  45. Why Myg? Why?
    *sobs*

    This was beautifully written though, my favorite:
    "Sometimes in the face impossible circumstances, you begin to understand that your will and your desires mean nothing in the face of your destiny—they are only agonies burdening you on the path to the inevitable."

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  46. Wow - I just found Osa bella and on the weekend I read it all - what can I say - it was absolutely awesome - loved every part of it. I read chapter 30 last night and I sat there stunned for about 5 minutes to think about everything - wow it hit me hard!
    You are a treasure Myg to take the time to write such a brilliant book and cannot wait to read more - thank-you again!

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  47. My first instinct was to flame you for all the angst but a good story cant be all lemons and joy. I am so along for the ride and completely trust you all the way. I have to complement you on your action writing. I write a little my self (i have no confidence to put any of it online) but writing action has always been tricky for me. Your fight/fleeing scene was captivating.

    The ending with Edward and Bella was heartbreaking and made me cry like a little kid with a skinned knee. I want to kick Jake in his shins then in his balls. I can't wait wait for the next chapter.

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  48. I have to admit I'm a little late to the party for this chapter. I was away for the weekend and that combined with Myg's comments about readers wanting to lynch her ass once she posted the chapter, well, I was a little scared to read it.

    So I finally did and now I'll be fucking fetal waiting for the next chapter where I hope Bella wakes up and it's all a bad dream...

    I'm feeling a little anxious but jeezus more fucking hamster fucker this is some good shizz and I'm on the edge of my seat barely even taking a breath!

    Love you Myg! {{mwah}}

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  49. Da bears, yummy. Seems that I smell moss, dirt, damp and hmmm… Super Bella?
    It won’t be easy but I’ll wait ‘till you tell me.
    This Jacob is really getting on my nerves. No tact , no consideration, no respect,
    no honesty. I wouldn’t mind seeing him get knocked back a step preferably by Bella.
    MMinerva

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  50. If Bella gets knocked up by Jacob and has some spirit love child I am throwing my computer.

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  51. Myg, please make @Betty Pink Buttercream's comment come true! I'm a total B + E shipper, but that would be FUCKING phenomenal!!!!

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  52. Myg, dont listen to @succubus. That would be horrible if that happened, I wouldn't be able to handle it. I would die. Hoping you update today or I will deffo die lol. Still loving you Myg x

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  53. OMG!!! MYG! What an amazing chapter! Well, I'm glad that Bella survived thus far and so did all the Cullens. I'm super happy Jake saved the day by stopping the bears! I was so shocked to find out that the bears think that Bella's their spirit guide. I mean, Wow! Just wow. My heart is sooo broken right now though. Bella did do the right thing saying she will marry Jake because that seems to be the only way outta this little situation... Or so it seems... Well.. Heres to hoping Bella and Edward reunite because they were soo ment to be together forever and for always!<3
    SO thank you Myg for such a great story! You are trully amazing! Can't wait to read the chapters to come! :)

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  54. OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG IM HAVING A HEART ATTACK!!!!!!!!

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  55. OMG!!! MYG! What an amazing chapter! Well, I'm glad that Bella survived thus far and so did all the Cullens. I'm super happy Jake saved the day by stopping the bears! I was so shocked to find out that the bears think that Bella's their spirit guide. I mean, Wow! Just wow. My heart is sooo broken right now though. Bella did do the right thing saying she will marry Jake because that seems to be the only way outta this little situation... Or so it seems... Well.. Heres to hoping Bella and Edward reunite because they were soo ment to be together forever and for always!<3
    SO thank you Myg for such a great story! You are trully amazing! Can't wait to read the chapters to come! :)

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  56. My first instinct was to flame you for all the angst but a good story cant be all lemons and joy. I am so along for the ride and completely trust you all the way. I have to complement you on your action writing. I write a little my self (i have no confidence to put any of it online) but writing action has always been tricky for me. Your fight/fleeing scene was captivating.

    The ending with Edward and Bella was heartbreaking and made me cry like a little kid with a skinned knee. I want to kick Jake in his shins then in his balls. I can't wait wait for the next chapter.

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  57. Wow - I just found Osa bella and on the weekend I read it all - what can I say - it was absolutely awesome - loved every part of it. I read chapter 30 last night and I sat there stunned for about 5 minutes to think about everything - wow it hit me hard!
    You are a treasure Myg to take the time to write such a brilliant book and cannot wait to read more - thank-you again!

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