tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post1448978224837680654..comments2024-03-26T05:24:56.783-04:00Comments on TWITARDED: 15 Step - Chapter 3 Twilight Fan FictionSnarkier Than Youhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10797449606526868507noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-80729156661038870302019-09-14T06:56:20.436-04:002019-09-14T06:56:20.436-04:00Being a vampire has certain limitations, but it ca...Being a vampire has certain limitations, but it can also be a ton of fun. Your extra strengths and abilities can make you successful in almost every endeavor you participate in and before you know it the money and acquaintances will come streaming in. You can build wealth and gain prestige and notoriety and attempt things you may never have even considered as a human. One thing you will definitely have more of is time. Beef up your education and learn all you every wanted to. Travel the world to see things most people only ever see on TV This is going to be especially fun if you turned to share your life with one of us. Let us show you the wonders of the world. Learn new languages, go skydiving or scuba dive with sharks, visit the African safari. You no longer need to be scared of nature or wildlife – you will have become the worlds strongest predator. Have fun with it and your life as a vampire can be more fulfilling than you ever dreamed. Explore, experiment, experience and get excited. There’s a big world out there with lots to see and do and as a vampire, you can do it all. If your dream is to become a powerful person in life contact: Richvampirekindom@gmail.comJerome Samsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00886505335771600600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-35736692715408243742009-06-10T06:22:00.509-04:002009-06-10T06:22:00.509-04:00I always love the dark twifanfics!
No matter how ...I always love the dark twifanfics!<br /><br />No matter how Edward is portrayed, he's always so sexy...sigh52 Faceshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05234139554435412232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-60195052554989025762009-06-05T21:31:20.123-04:002009-06-05T21:31:20.123-04:00So I'm really really wondering what Edwards ba...So I'm really really wondering what Edwards back story is?? Why he's perceived as a bit of a trouble maker. Your Bella obviously isn't the suffer in silence type, but I hope this outburst brings her and charlie a little closer at least so there isn't so much awkwardness and avoidance. Pissed about what her mom did tho. Bring on the next post!Team Six Packhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08378545885127403088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-75384108693131307732009-06-04T19:10:25.513-04:002009-06-04T19:10:25.513-04:00@scentaddict - Thank you! The email alert is a go...@scentaddict - Thank you! The email alert is a good idea. I'll have to tinker with blogger and see if I can come up with something. <br /><br />I should hopefully be posting chapter 4 sometime next week so stay tuned!Jenny Jerkfacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15659204046693465182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-8628523828517475362009-06-04T12:34:12.405-04:002009-06-04T12:34:12.405-04:00Wow JJ, your writing is great and your characters ...Wow JJ, your writing is great and your characters are so strong! Well done, I'm waiting for more! And I was panting so much after Le Petit Mort I had to wait to calm down before I could write to you!<br />Will there be any way to get email alerts when you update the story? Or do you want to consider also uploading it to fanfiction.net so we can get alerts when you put up new chapters? Either way keep it up, it's great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-34920486607275072442009-06-01T22:27:46.659-04:002009-06-01T22:27:46.659-04:00love the story!love the story!Ozziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13411853921328272182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-4257851153638035492009-06-01T18:13:01.104-04:002009-06-01T18:13:01.104-04:00OK I'm waiting for my 4 favorite fanfics to post s...OK I'm waiting for my 4 favorite fanfics to post something. It's like you all have your periods at the same time! wtf. waaah.OK - We all have been waiting for WideAwake, I'm also grooving on "In The Blink of an Eye" "Wild SWan" is my new fav and you JJ!!! I love angsty tough Bellas.<br />Highly recommend these toi your readers. BUt shit. I can't wait to find out what your Bella does after being so abandoned. How will it reveal to Edward- I'm sure with an effin lot of angst. But she can't get herself kicked out of H.S. now can she! Seems like drugs or alcohol may be next. OK - I'm just blowing air out my ass - hoping when I'm done - you posted. I'm selfish- What can I say!K_InTheFlonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-68022539963447899722009-06-01T14:07:28.836-04:002009-06-01T14:07:28.836-04:00Oh I am LOVING this story. But hurry up cuz I don'...Oh I am LOVING this story. But hurry up cuz I don't like waiting. LOL You're doing an awesome job!Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02441772698743607230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-24377872678777419212009-05-31T17:34:08.527-04:002009-05-31T17:34:08.527-04:00my last comment was the one bout adult stuff and i...my last comment was the one bout adult stuff and i was totally juss wondering and i completely get that u have to keep it natural and i like it better like that anyways, once again great story i love it =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-47623459052624600542009-05-31T09:44:06.056-04:002009-05-31T09:44:06.056-04:00If that comes off a little on the extreme side, I'...If that comes off a little on the extreme side, I'm not going to apologize, because that's how strongly I feel about it. Awesome that you were able pull so much emotion out of me and everyone else apparently. I literally felt the rage and the heartbreak.Scarlet Phoenixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13078193350437364512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-76963185506533541642009-05-31T09:38:38.653-04:002009-05-31T09:38:38.653-04:00OMG! First, you totally just made me deal with a c...OMG! First, you totally just made me deal with a customer with tears in my eyes. (that lady's prolly thinking this bitch is nuts!)<br /><br />I FUCKING LOVE IT!(and yes I have to drop the F-bomb in respect) I'm so tired of Bella being so pansy, seriously. Just cuz we have emotions and usually cry does not mean we'll take shit and be mopey. I love that she kicked that bitches ass. (She has to have a lot of built up agression. When I get mad, I'm breaking something be it a face or whatevers in reach. Nice to see that side represented) <br />I love the realness. Teenage years aren't all bunnies and daisies. And I love that's she's into music and doesn't like to read.<br /><br />Listen I know you have a life and everything but you got me and I'll be waiting very impatiently for the next chapter. Very nice! I'm very impressed and thirsty for more!<br /><br />STY lock her in the damn closet and throw away that key girl!Scarlet Phoenixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13078193350437364512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-19675332100448197392009-05-31T05:26:42.058-04:002009-05-31T05:26:42.058-04:00wow cool, i like it !! It took some time to get in...wow cool, i like it !! It took some time to get into the characters, specially while reading the first chapters. One had to erase a bit SM´s Bella and Edward so that one can read your story unbiased, but then it turns out pretty cool. <br />And as i now read the 2nd part, you got me ! :-)) Now one starts understanding Bella and i love her fight with Lauren-the-bitch!<br />Waiting for the next part, go one JJ your doing a great job.!!Dannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05998128531860725536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-271133336760034642009-05-31T01:39:41.634-04:002009-05-31T01:39:41.634-04:00My gaytard life is not allowing for fanfic. :( LIF...My gaytard life is not allowing for fanfic. :( LIFE WTH? <br /><br />This is the very next thing I am reading. <br /><br />Oh and WOOT to over 41,000 visitors and all the followers! WOWZERS how the Twitard nation has grown. Fin.Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-71080889909770065722009-05-30T23:18:28.262-04:002009-05-30T23:18:28.262-04:00I finally had a chance to read it - great stuff! M...I finally had a chance to read it - great stuff! My heart was breaking for Bella when she destroyed her room...<br /><br />And the nerd in me also really appreciates the flow of your writing and lack of typos! :) I get distracted with that kind of stuff, even if the story is good. :)<br /><br />Are you planning on putting this on FF or Twilighted so it's all put together nicey-nicey?Kristenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14589585649635160707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-47293589184072096052009-05-30T22:21:29.728-04:002009-05-30T22:21:29.728-04:00Awesome story! Your writing is terrific. Can't wai...Awesome story! Your writing is terrific. Can't wait to see what happens next!Twiblisshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03224543845816211473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-54236652560108444212009-05-30T21:38:38.297-04:002009-05-30T21:38:38.297-04:00Thank you for the great comments!
I know many o...Thank you for the great comments! <br /><br />I know many of you are eager for the 'adult' stuff to start. I'm trying to keep the flow of the story as natural as possible. We can't have Bella jumpin' into the sack on the first date, can we? Well, yes we can but... :) I promise, I'll get there soon. In the meantime I'll try to get some shorts up for you.<br /><br />I am insanely pleased that my story has evoked emotion from many of you. Even if it is a sad one. <br /><br />Thank again for you comments!Jenny Jerkfacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15659204046693465182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-3937410651090778522009-05-30T19:18:19.871-04:002009-05-30T19:18:19.871-04:00Well done JJ! Everyone else on here has pretty mu...Well done JJ! Everyone else on here has pretty much said what I was going to.. so I don't want to repeat! :)Bobinanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-90674375662340245702009-05-30T19:11:54.523-04:002009-05-30T19:11:54.523-04:00It's just great. I can't wait to read the next cha...It's just great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This was just as good as the previous entrykathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10392736656747699537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-79507884212089117692009-05-30T15:34:46.794-04:002009-05-30T15:34:46.794-04:00JJ - Simply Brilliant!!
Can't wait for next cha...JJ - Simply Brilliant!! <br /><br />Can't wait for next chapter. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-49825923409750464102009-05-30T13:07:30.807-04:002009-05-30T13:07:30.807-04:00this is a great story so far. they might not be al...this is a great story so far. they might not be all sunshine and rainbows, but its realistic and angry and angsty and sometimes thats really preferable. i think its great.ktnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-61483588241997156272009-05-30T12:59:01.847-04:002009-05-30T12:59:01.847-04:00awesome awesome story! im loving it so far! BUT U ...awesome awesome story! im loving it so far! BUT U SAID THAT THIS IS ONLY FOR ADULTS AND THERE ISNT ANY ADULT CONTENT IN IT? IS THERE GOING TO BE LATER IN THE STORY??? BUT I LOOOOOOVE IT! IT MADE ME CRY!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-55754602908281756882009-05-30T12:32:08.069-04:002009-05-30T12:32:08.069-04:00@sunshine/@heather--I ccmpletely agree with your c...@sunshine/@heather--I ccmpletely agree with your comments.<br /><br />I definitely got all choked up when she freaks out. The abandonment she is feeling is truly palpable and it put a big lump in my throat and made me weepy. Of course, as a mother, I am thinking how could Renee do this to her child? This only made it more emotional for me. I, too, love that she is angry and angst--definitely makes Bella more spicy. <br /><br />I also agree that you should throw in some more "colorful" language--it seems a bit tame for you ;)<br /><br />I look forward to seeing where this all goes JJ. I am sure all of us are waiting for more Edward soon too--thanks for sharing all this with us.VitaminRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168002453820589518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-62957843415852203232009-05-30T10:57:31.615-04:002009-05-30T10:57:31.615-04:00I like that you are making them a little more real...I like that you are making them a little more real than SM did. Come on, Bella didn't even have an IPOD or a cellphone!! <br /><br />I can't wait to see if either of them drink or take drugs(that sounds weird but when reading NM I kept waiting for Bella to get involved with the "bad" crowd and party up a little bit to live dangerously.) Still love me some Edward :)want2Binforksnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-54683905208174035832009-05-30T10:17:05.982-04:002009-05-30T10:17:05.982-04:00I am totally digging this story! I seriously love...I am totally digging this story! I seriously love that Bella is a total bad ass. I loved the ass whooping she gave Lauren, and the total attitude she gives Edward (a little taste of his own medicine!) Keep it coming (I can't wait for the dirty stuff to begin, especially if your short story is any indication of just how dirty you can write!) Thanks for giving the FanFic a go - you're doing an awesome job! Rock on. (I have a new Google ID - formerly Stacy207)sjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02759445727064325439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-41455559649581353442009-05-30T09:10:14.591-04:002009-05-30T09:10:14.591-04:00Good Turn of events-Bella has no home with mom.
I'...Good Turn of events-Bella has no home with mom.<br />I'm enjoying this so much! Yes - I agree with others - Angsty reads rock. Thanks JJ! Nicely Done.K_InTheFlonoreply@blogger.com