tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post3352603307028974737..comments2024-03-26T05:24:56.783-04:00Comments on TWITARDED: 15 Step - Chapter Five - The LovecatsSnarkier Than Youhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10797449606526868507noreply@blogger.comBlogger46125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-79258722825719073202009-08-02T10:05:39.365-04:002009-08-02T10:05:39.365-04:00Wow I absolutely loved this. I NEED more. Please :...Wow I absolutely loved this. I NEED more. Please :)Tinanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-6175263179568632382009-07-31T14:25:49.594-04:002009-07-31T14:25:49.594-04:00Love it!!! Keep 'em comin'!Love it!!! Keep 'em comin'!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-45800011052111217262009-07-17T15:33:22.946-04:002009-07-17T15:33:22.946-04:00Holy crap!
You're worse than those people who ...Holy crap!<br />You're worse than those people who leave you hanging on cliffs<br />I so badly wanna read more of this<br />*plants a laptop in front of JJ*<br />Write dammit! =D xxxZoomagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15027508006982366941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-55518718145109201002009-07-16T20:03:15.659-04:002009-07-16T20:03:15.659-04:00So I finally got the chance to read the latest and...So I finally got the chance to read the latest and might I say that it's fucking brilliant! It gave me just a slight case of fanfic blue balls - I was hoping Bella would slut it up just a little more but I can wait! Great writing JJ - kudos! Can't wait for more!sjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02759445727064325439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-30690781975181149962009-07-16T12:19:05.441-04:002009-07-16T12:19:05.441-04:00*jumps up and down* i rarely ever come across trai...*jumps up and down* i rarely ever come across trail of dead fans anymore. they are fantastic (the band and the fans). EXCELLENT soundtrack :). <br /><br />p.s. HOT HOT HOT HOT HOTlane https://www.blogger.com/profile/02335718493965833793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-69072680451101671662009-07-15T00:16:58.701-04:002009-07-15T00:16:58.701-04:00Just got a chance to read the new chapter! Stupid ...Just got a chance to read the new chapter! Stupid vacation postponed everything awesome. I'm doing an update video tomorrow for Fan Fiction Wednesday and don't worry you WILL be mentioned!ApplesnFeathers--Susiehttp://applesnfeathers.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-33816424457717833722009-07-14T05:07:06.182-04:002009-07-14T05:07:06.182-04:00I held off as long as I could, but I just couldn&#...I held off as long as I could, but I just couldn't stay away from some action any longer. <br /><br />"Fuckgasm" - haha great word<br /><br />So now I'm done with all 5 chapters and staring hollowly at you, waiting for you to type the next 849...52 Faceshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05234139554435412232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-52861428604395915072009-07-13T13:35:01.669-04:002009-07-13T13:35:01.669-04:00Please write more soon! Most Twilight fan-fic I...Please write more soon! Most Twilight fan-fic I've read is pretty terrible but this story is really great! I love Bella in the books but I really like the sarcastic edge you've given her here. Much more realistic! Your writing style is nicely developed as well, very interesting. Please, please write another chapter SOON!!morning theftnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-67527894955820004552009-07-13T01:48:25.844-04:002009-07-13T01:48:25.844-04:00@Jenny Jerkface - music discussions, definitely! Y...@Jenny Jerkface - music discussions, definitely! Your story inspired me to re-listen to Either/Or. Sigh. So. Effing. Good. I love that your Bella goes to shows. Yay.<br /><br />I saw Man Man at the Brooklyn Masonic Temple and the energy was amazing: http://blog.limewire.com/posts/10089-man-man-yeasayer-brooklyn-masonic-temple/ (I used to write for a music blog.)<br /><br />Have also seen Trail of Dead (can't type out their whole name all the time!) a few times--love em.<br /><br />Fugazi, Modest Mouse, Operation Ivy, Snapcase, Ani, I seriously feel like you've ransacked my CD collection! I also love Magnetic Fields, the Detroit Cobras, The Walkmen, Elvis, Grizzly Bear, Cat Power, Belle & Sebastien, ahh the list could go on forever.Cracked Countryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18192366005894145056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-71451438230129900972009-07-12T02:22:18.553-04:002009-07-12T02:22:18.553-04:00I love your blog, don't be jealous but I think...I love your blog, don't be jealous but I think I love your smut a little bit more because it combines you, Bella and bad Edward. Of course yes to author's notes. And please, please, please... post next chappy soon!Berethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02050622036949643174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-91876499673166146542009-07-11T18:08:47.073-04:002009-07-11T18:08:47.073-04:00WOW Im a twilight neophyte and I'm already hoo...WOW Im a twilight neophyte and I'm already hooked, loveedddd your Adult versions, always great to read a too-hot Edward...Rob Pattinson is pretty but he is getting so skinny, probably we need to start casting your Edward...Atheneanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-41278156123893591532009-07-11T00:02:41.113-04:002009-07-11T00:02:41.113-04:00can not wait for the next chapter! you are excelle...can not wait for the next chapter! you are excellent!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-27993826959918926922009-07-10T21:13:57.735-04:002009-07-10T21:13:57.735-04:00Can't believe you're a virgin FanFic write...Can't believe you're a virgin FanFic writer! This rocks! I luvs me some bad-boy Edward!<br /><br />Really good job of building up to the lemony goodness. So many stories have E & B bumpin' uglies within hours of meeting each other. Or they have them acting like silly goofy teenagers! I like what you're doing here.<br /><br />Please keep going, and thanks so much for sharing. I am humbled by your awesome talent!The Rugbymomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16128183567362805019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-41667028088529979662009-07-10T21:06:13.941-04:002009-07-10T21:06:13.941-04:00It's so fun to hear your 'voice' in Be...It's so fun to hear your 'voice' in Bella's sarcasm (the after-school-special lines/bloated body were a riot!). And I need a notebook to write down all my fav lines, but I think the one I loved the most was after she crawled into bed smelling Edward on her, "like a secret that was mine to keep." <br /><br />I also get a little weirded out (don't know why) when authors sneak in canon text, but it totally worked with this story. :) <br /><br />Can't wait to see where it goes and if Edward holds up his deal, and if Bella lets him (oh, who am I kidding - she has to, right!!!!???) Oh, I feel some angst coming......things are too perfect right now.<br /><br />Can't wait for the next chapter!!Kristenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14589585649635160707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-86374960116895783452009-07-10T20:19:47.620-04:002009-07-10T20:19:47.620-04:00Thank you all! I am out of town right now and I&#...Thank you all! I am out of town right now and I'm sneaking little peeks at the computer but I promise, promise, promise I will respond when I get back. <br /><br />@Powolla - you and I have to talk music - Man Man, Elliot Smith... Between the Bars is my FAVORITE song (you left this on another post).Jenny Jerkfacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15659204046693465182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-30616556247772684632009-07-10T17:39:31.312-04:002009-07-10T17:39:31.312-04:00I am reading this AS SOON AS I have alone time. Wh...I am reading this AS SOON AS I have alone time. Which will be sparse in the next couple of weeks, but it will happen. Cuz I hear this is HAWT. And, obviously, nomable.<br /><br />Christ. It's amazing how perving can become a brand.funnybecauseitstruehttp://www.nomness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-3298954100605578502009-07-10T17:38:44.156-04:002009-07-10T17:38:44.156-04:00JJ, this gets 5 lemon-scented Cullen crest panties...JJ, this gets 5 lemon-scented Cullen crest panties out of 5. And it's a total tease, but a good one. <br /><br />I'd love to read some notes. Keep on writin'.<br /><br />And congrats to you gals for being finalists in the Blogluxe contest.lily guillotinenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-80705148716179430452009-07-10T16:10:57.165-04:002009-07-10T16:10:57.165-04:00Would I be a traitor if I said I almost prefer 15 ...Would I be a traitor if I said I almost prefer 15 Step to the real Twilight?? Dammit I don't care! This shiz is so fabulous! I actually like Bella now that she's not all whiny and self-sacrificing. She's got edge and it kick's ass. I have to be honest though, I was very reluctant to read 15 Step because everyone was human and all that jazz but holy bejeez I'm sure glad I got over that! Now I REALLY don't get any work done. Keep it up girl, it is fantabulocity at it's finest and I cannot wait until the next chapter! Woot!Twi-menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-54384603216667273442009-07-10T15:50:25.263-04:002009-07-10T15:50:25.263-04:00Just read all the chapters to date and wooooo I sw...Just read all the chapters to date and wooooo I swear if any man walks by my desk right now I might start humping his leg...even the short fat bald stuttering manager with the foot fetish! Great piece of writing!Neuro Sishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15461082226617601090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-18235098169592315042009-07-10T13:57:11.294-04:002009-07-10T13:57:11.294-04:00Just thought I'd let you know that I think 15 ...Just thought I'd let you know that I think 15 Steps is totes fabulous! Always excited when I see an update on your blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-14694545458151979682009-07-10T13:51:58.199-04:002009-07-10T13:51:58.199-04:00JJ. Great job, now I'm all hot and bothered at...JJ. Great job, now I'm all hot and bothered at work. :) Girl, you are creative. I'm looking very forward to the next chapters if you know what I mean. Hmm. (wait, can't type, that was supposed to be clearing my throat) and * this is me winking one eye.Honolulu Girl-Suzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09026727371233750311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-3741031100855253972009-07-10T12:50:44.842-04:002009-07-10T12:50:44.842-04:00Ha, glad you're teasing us. It's going to ...Ha, glad you're teasing us. It's going to be a long wait till your next chapter (not to rush you or anything!).<br /><br />I love this feisty/hardass/(slightly)damaged Bella and everything that comes out of her mouth.<br /><br />And I agree with a previous commenter. Edward seems a little too smooth..not that he's not sexy as hell. Can't wait to see what's up his badboy sleeve.Cracked Countryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18192366005894145056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-59343090292266799112009-07-10T12:06:22.614-04:002009-07-10T12:06:22.614-04:00I agree with Karen12353, YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE! It&...I agree with Karen12353, YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE! It's such a great story so far. I'm totally digging it. Please don't go too long before writing the next chapter. I don't think I'll be able to handle it!Jashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16918718810781148356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-24692487382072243342009-07-10T11:54:06.756-04:002009-07-10T11:54:06.756-04:00Holy Smoken Panties, I need to find me a fire exti...Holy Smoken Panties, I need to find me a fire extinguisher and a new set of panties.<br /><br />That was amazing! Can't wait for more!<br /><br />Yes, to author's notes!red_bellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04643896155215594362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-3999888184324873132009-07-10T11:38:41.493-04:002009-07-10T11:38:41.493-04:00Ugh!! I HATE when the chapter ends. Please keep wr...Ugh!! I HATE when the chapter ends. Please keep writing. I love this story and can't wait for more!Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02441772698743607230noreply@blogger.com