tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post3449973391665892661..comments2024-03-26T05:24:56.783-04:00Comments on TWITARDED: Osa Bella - Chapter 25 "Concerning Vampires" [Twilight FanFiction]Snarkier Than Youhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10797449606526868507noreply@blogger.comBlogger52125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-4377229392866731422011-04-29T10:15:25.620-04:002011-04-29T10:15:25.620-04:00Da Bears????????????? MMinervaDa Bears?????????????<br> MMinervaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-12511573505817174612011-04-29T10:15:24.876-04:002011-04-29T10:15:24.876-04:00WOW. MY. FAVORITE. EDWARD. EVER. That is all UNNNN...WOW. MY. FAVORITE. EDWARD. EVER. That is all UNNNNFFF!kellyehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12237388184325775495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-79649760622304154472010-09-21T17:50:15.800-04:002010-09-21T17:50:15.800-04:00WOW. MY. FAVORITE. EDWARD. EVER. That is all UNNNN...WOW. MY. FAVORITE. EDWARD. EVER. That is all UNNNNFFF!kellyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12237388184325775495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-31765516942557157922010-09-01T01:38:52.143-04:002010-09-01T01:38:52.143-04:00Myg. Not gonna lie.. At first Domward kind of scar...Myg. Not gonna lie.. At first Domward kind of scarred me. I didn't know what to think of it/him. He went from being so nice to don't do this, don't do that. It kind of shocked me. After the first Bella and Eward fuck, i have gotten used to Domward and i have to say i really really enjoy him now.;) I can now see that he is only trying to make sure not to hurt Bella which is really sweet, thoughtful and caring! So don't worry about Domward! He's Fuckin HOT! A majority of us love Domward Myg! Don't change him a bit! Thanks once again for the smut fix! <3 I am hooked!Heathernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-2923995922323030812010-08-05T07:56:46.054-04:002010-08-05T07:56:46.054-04:00I don't have time as usual to respond to all y...I don't have time as usual to respond to all your excellent comments, but I wanted to say MMinverva, there's a post explaining in more detail some of the character motivations behind this chapter over at the osa blog: http://osabella.mygdala.com and yes, you are right in your interpretation of the d/s theme here. Edward is trying to keep Bella safe. More on this over at the other blog. <br /><br />And italhurts? You're spot on, as you always are. Thanks for giving a good response to the questions brought up by MMinerva.<br /><br />And the bears? Oh, those pesky bears. They are out there. Wonder when we'll be seeing them again?<br /><br />xoxo <br /><br />love all you guys and wish I could just talk Osa Bella with you all day,<br /><br />MygMyg (Mercy Brown)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05327787947240499666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-21545237707495750802010-08-05T02:45:27.589-04:002010-08-05T02:45:27.589-04:00So, sue me, I'm still awake (reading MoBS and ...So, sue me, I'm still awake (reading MoBS and With Teeth updates) and see that MMinerva just commented.<br /><br />If I were a ff author I would so love being called on the matt like this. You can only have so much sunshine blown up your ass and I, as a fellow reader, really enjoy reading your comments and appreciate the concerns of a double-edged reviewer. <br /><br />But, I have to challenge a bit- if you waited 52 years for something and then it started to prove out, couldn't it create a walking-on-eggshells sort of caution? Especially since E started to question the vision thinking perhaps it was just a misguided prom that he saw? And manic does create feelings of invincibility. It's worth reminding us that Bella is manic becuase she hasn't even had the chance to return to baseline yet. <br /><br />And, I'm just biding my time until the bears are completely understood. <br /><br />Suddenly I want a Twitarded FF bookclub.italhurtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16805231926910616122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-83254659889991648492010-08-05T02:22:00.361-04:002010-08-05T02:22:00.361-04:00Da Bears?????????????
MMinervaDa Bears?????????????<br /> MMinervaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-66722762099666728852010-08-05T02:07:01.640-04:002010-08-05T02:07:01.640-04:00I’m not feeling the dominant/submissive. I would p...I’m not feeling the dominant/submissive. I would prefer--and do--read it as E wanting to protect B rather than control her. They are going to be equals and I would hate to see E THINK that he was the boss of B. This E hasn’t had much relationship experience and lets face it B is acting like a fifteen year old. If I see “manic” one more time I’m going to throw up. B has suffered but she needs to step up, take responsibility for herself and her choices…I want to say grow up! I love the concept of Osa Bella and the potential but …neither lead is showing much personal growth. <br /> I love the 52 very long years of looking for B but then I wonder why he didn’t move closer faster once he found her. Yeah, yeah, I know…fear of hurting her…<br />E being able to glamour B is interesting. I would like to know more about that…hope he’s being truthful about the limited use.<br />I like that E ‘s facial expression is starting to be described …it makes him more dimensional and warms him up a bit. You don’t have Robert Pattinsons eyes to tell the story so the descriptive terms make E seem less cold and removed from emotion. I would like to see more facial expression from him.<br />OSA BELLA….Godlike Bella???? Osa Myg…luv your stuff.<br />MMinervaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-28734675890760662132010-08-04T18:36:11.581-04:002010-08-04T18:36:11.581-04:00Almost forgot to post this here:
"my vampire...Almost forgot to post this here:<br /><br />"my vampires" interesting statement<br /><br />Excellent use of the prom scene and her Bella not wanting to get married.<br /><br />"I couldn't commit to anyone else because I knew you were coming," he said. Oh goodness, what a way to make me whimper and swoon.<br /><br />"Fifty-two very long years." I can't even imagine the torture of that wait. I have that to wait for my movie love too ;)<br /><br />But sadly, it lost out to the part of my mind that said, "Oh my God, he's going to fuck me. Yay!" Bella, Bella, Bella - I can't blame her though.<br /><br />And I was right... WOW! I need a cold shower now. Thank youDangrdafnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04940599664505953044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-46405876671562332392010-08-04T15:48:54.516-04:002010-08-04T15:48:54.516-04:00Myg!!!! Holy shit Batman!!! That. Was. Amazing!!...Myg!!!! Holy shit Batman!!! That. Was. Amazing!!!!!! Gah, I don't even know what else to say...*looks around for smokey treats*SmuttierThanYouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13692938634348267935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-30596429666540860212010-08-03T01:07:04.056-04:002010-08-03T01:07:04.056-04:00Yep, Mr. VitR got lucky as soon as I could get the...Yep, Mr. VitR got lucky as soon as I could get the kids to bed after reading this chapter. He doesn't know it...but he thanks you Myg.<br /><br />Love, love, love. I love naughty Bella pushing the limits...only to be schooled in the end.<br /><br />Big hugs and a thousand thank yous for this story. XOVitaminRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168002453820589518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-67542037549155467332010-08-02T21:00:03.600-04:002010-08-02T21:00:03.600-04:00Fucking amazing. I don't want it to ever end! ...Fucking amazing. I don't want it to ever end! Myg, you rock : ) xoxoPaintedMermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18316007870043126528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-31987076728152323792010-08-02T15:58:20.113-04:002010-08-02T15:58:20.113-04:00*panting*
That. Was. Amazing!!!!
Okay, now I'...*panting*<br /><br />That. Was. Amazing!!!!<br /><br />Okay, now I'm psyched for Jacob and the Quiluetes. No doubt they'll ambush the Cullens. Can't wait. Hope Derek and Mike get an eye full of Edward and Bella. If Edward believes Bella's in trouble he won't be able to hide in the woods with the Bears.<br /><br />GAH! Your own story is climaxing, Myg. LOLKerrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17068190359325445987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-83202904748516761102010-08-02T15:53:21.306-04:002010-08-02T15:53:21.306-04:00Royalwe1 - Thank you, thank you, thank you. I'...Royalwe1 - Thank you, thank you, thank you. I'm heading on over there to read MOTU now. Be back later.myinnergoddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00170268574729440768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-77676407142942281582010-08-02T10:51:51.043-04:002010-08-02T10:51:51.043-04:00Hi Mygs--here's just a quickie (sorry I'm ...Hi Mygs--here's just a quickie (sorry I'm on the road)<br /><br />Thanks for getting me all a flutter while in a lame-ass motel room in BFE with my mom while hauling ass across country--AWKWARD!!<br /><br />I just wanted you to know I'm still reading and loving every second of it!! Myg, I cannot wait to find out what happens, and this shit is nuclear hawt--woop woop!<br /><br />tootlesm474https://www.blogger.com/profile/09106316010662984635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-72927981286543178252010-08-02T02:47:28.240-04:002010-08-02T02:47:28.240-04:00*click* *suck* *exhale*
That was fucking awesome ...*click* *suck* *exhale*<br /><br />That was fucking awesome and totally worth the wait!!!<br /><br />Thanks Mygivegotitbad2https://www.blogger.com/profile/00295457819846069452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-55092014402489015812010-08-01T23:46:46.298-04:002010-08-01T23:46:46.298-04:00Holy shit that was fucking hot!!!!
Wow excuse me w...Holy shit that was fucking hot!!!!<br />Wow excuse me while I change my panties. <br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Myg I bow to your creative genius!red_bellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04643896155215594362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-86204004399395335012010-08-01T23:20:11.137-04:002010-08-01T23:20:11.137-04:00Okay, now that I've recovered from my, ahem, l...Okay, now that I've recovered from my, ahem, little episode there...<br /><br />A) I'm 100% with @franki above - Weeeeeeee! I love that your characters are so well-rounded and flawed. It makes them so likeable!<br /><br />B) This chapter was SOOOOOO worth the wait! I know you're a busy chica, and I am so in love with your story that I love what you give us, when you can. Big ups to Mr. Myg too, we owe him!!<br /><br />C) You may be getting "WTF"s from others, but I feel like you NAILED it. I totally understood the reasons for Edward's insistence that Bella, ahem, comply, within the context of your story - reading your explanation over at the Osa Bella site just confirmed all that. I loved it. LOVED it.<br /><br />D) One of my favorite things about this story is that just when I think I know what's coming next, you surprise me! The fact that Edward has known about Bella for 52 years... brilliant.<br /><br />Shall I continue to sing your praises all night? Unfortunately I've got to get to bed, but in summary, I am lovin' on this fic SO HARD RIGHT NOW and hey, if you wanna make it 100+ chapters, who am I to argue? :-P<br /><br />THANKS FOR BEING AWESOME!Fooorkspimphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06595312034165893813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-73592887023235258572010-08-01T23:03:10.033-04:002010-08-01T23:03:10.033-04:00*Gasp*
The massage... the sex...that ORGASM...
C...*Gasp*<br /><br />The massage... the sex...that ORGASM...<br /><br />CRASH<br /><br />*emerges, hair tousled, from underneath the desk, clutching the chair for support*<br /><br />Sailward's dom-ish side....<br /><br />*gurgle*Fooorkspimphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06595312034165893813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-49008908211229651722010-08-01T22:05:05.992-04:002010-08-01T22:05:05.992-04:00That was awesomey awesomeness at it's awesomes...That was awesomey awesomeness at it's awesomest - totes.<br /><br />LOVE LOVE LOVE how your characters are so effin' flawed. It makes them so real and creates that roller coaster effect that I get (and love sooo much) reading this story. Weeeeeee!!!frankihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04944291875796343384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-29354134032676579452010-08-01T21:32:51.251-04:002010-08-01T21:32:51.251-04:00Ooookay then,
@Cheryl - I actually wrote a commen...Ooookay then,<br /><br />@Cheryl - I actually wrote a comment that was so motherfucking long, blogger wouldn't post it. Yep. That's me. Nice and brief.<br /><br />So I posted my extended comment over at http://osabella.mygdala.com and if any of you have any interest in the intricate logic behind "get on your hands and knees" feel free to head on over there and we can talk about it there. <br /><br />Otherwise, thanks for all the great comments here, you know I love them and I love you all for reading and sharing them with me.<br /><br />xo,<br />Myg<br /><br />HAPPY BIRTHDAY MRS. MOO!! MWAH! KISSES!Myg (Mercy Brown)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05327787947240499666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-67356243479030344492010-08-01T21:09:29.035-04:002010-08-01T21:09:29.035-04:00Kitty - "Fifty" is a nickname for Edward...Kitty - "Fifty" is a nickname for Edward in the fanfiction story Master of the Universe (MOTU). It's another great story. Go read it here: http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=8511Royalwe1https://www.blogger.com/profile/13147954267278437377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-44308361423055461022010-08-01T20:48:55.333-04:002010-08-01T20:48:55.333-04:00Myg - I'm not sure if this is proof of how muc...Myg - I'm not sure if this is proof of how much I like your story or what a freak I am. I went and saw Eclipse (again) last weekend. For about 5 minutes I was totally confused. I kept wondering where Derek was and why wasn't Bella working at the school? Then I clued into my nuerosis and realized how wrapped up I am in this story. Great job. Again! <br /><br />I will send you nannies, food, alcohol....whatever you need to help keep the chapters coming. <br /><br />Thanks for sharing your story!Mommy Wishdomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07840619627314731020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-48792721986259744342010-08-01T20:13:53.241-04:002010-08-01T20:13:53.241-04:00Wow...what lonesometown said - I couldn't say ...Wow...what lonesometown said - I couldn't say it any better.<br />I loved the Downward. In the movie Sea of Love, Al Pacino ravages the woman (can't remember her name Ellen something) and my sister was horrified...I on the other hand, had to change my panties and try to get my heart restarted. I think it's primal and some women like<br />and some don't. <br />I have a question cuz I'm missing somethin - what does "Fifty" refer to. I saw it at another site and now here a couple of times. Please, please will someone educate me, it's driving me crazy.<br />Thanks.<br />And Myg, I can't wait for you to splain the meaning of these events, but I will make myself as I know you will dazzle (get it, dazzle) us when the time is right.myinnergoddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00170268574729440768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-80269029224089916492010-08-01T19:22:54.737-04:002010-08-01T19:22:54.737-04:00Nice job as always, Myg. Although, the tongue thi...Nice job as always, Myg. Although, the tongue thing sounded painful to me. Ouchie. Apparently Bella's tongue is connected to her puss. Good for her.Twilight Junkiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09649065539885582179noreply@blogger.com