tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post440739073969935437..comments2024-03-26T05:24:56.783-04:00Comments on TWITARDED: 15 Step - Chapter 7 - No One's Gonna Love You (Twilight Fan Fiction)Snarkier Than Youhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10797449606526868507noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-14855517145451592272009-09-24T21:53:25.053-04:002009-09-24T21:53:25.053-04:00JJ your writing in this chapter is just gorgeous! ...JJ your writing in this chapter is just gorgeous! The descriptions of the meadow in particular were simply poetic. I loved it! And of course, I love the angst. Great, great, work!!One Pushy Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12280363115124566761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-60119983824442916132009-09-24T08:53:37.216-04:002009-09-24T08:53:37.216-04:00JJ I love this. STY was right to lock you away. ...JJ I love this. STY was right to lock you away. Can't wait for the next chapter....post again soon, after you're off the meds.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-4303979027367044412009-09-21T13:38:34.505-04:002009-09-21T13:38:34.505-04:00JJ I loved this chapter so much! You left me on p...JJ I loved this chapter so much! You left me on pins & needles, holding my breath the whole time. Almost crying for Bella when Edward kicked her out of her car. I feel so bad for her & her pain but can relate to how she decompresses. Awesome way to end the chapter! Can't wait for more!Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01101509488074506391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-83292381234592018462009-09-19T16:12:28.257-04:002009-09-19T16:12:28.257-04:00it took me entirely way too long to get over here ...it took me entirely way too long to get over here and read this.. excellent.. pins and needles for the next chap!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-71254020496349945582009-09-19T12:24:09.250-04:002009-09-19T12:24:09.250-04:00awesome, i'm hooked. you rock. i've done...awesome, i'm hooked. you rock. i've done a calculation of the frequency of your chapter postings.... gah!maitwihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14173672939646234909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-13019959239507895902009-09-19T10:59:17.670-04:002009-09-19T10:59:17.670-04:00How did I not know you ladies were writing fanfic?...How did I not know you ladies were writing fanfic? Just got up to speed and I love it! I'm still relatively new to the Twilight world and fanfic but I am hooked on your writting style and your version of Edward and Bella. <br /><br />Keep it up, you're doing a brilliant job!Ouiser B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10094744359614061396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-32915711935743812252009-09-19T10:02:31.521-04:002009-09-19T10:02:31.521-04:00i just reread all the chapters! and it was worth i...i just reread all the chapters! and it was worth it (ya know it was 7 months ago when ch.1 was thankfuly unveiled). Great Chapter..Now we've gotten a taste of Edward's hard edges. Ouch! I like it! ready for more thank you!KinTheFlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12607420931528239193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-84975936984510225502009-09-19T02:57:22.815-04:002009-09-19T02:57:22.815-04:00i like angry edward. and i can't wait to see w...i like angry edward. and i can't wait to see where this is going. <br /><br />my favorite part is the playlist though. band of horses, neutral milk, illinois, trail of dead, etc. yum.lane https://www.blogger.com/profile/02335718493965833793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-13469364168578109372009-09-18T23:40:26.540-04:002009-09-18T23:40:26.540-04:00omg omg omg--am so excited you have another chapte...omg omg omg--am so excited you have another chapter--I've been waiting, and yep I'm saying it--ome ome ome<br /><br />ok, now must read!<br /><br />sorry about the anonymous--I'm shy ( and I know all to well how stalkers work, not that I am one...)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-71037038730550291452009-09-18T23:36:48.839-04:002009-09-18T23:36:48.839-04:00YAY! Thanks for the update! Lots of angst in thi...YAY! Thanks for the update! Lots of angst in this one...which must mean lots of sex in the next one :)<br /><br />Excellent as always!hispersonalbrandofheroinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07435793743058531051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-14371720922000382722009-09-18T20:37:23.685-04:002009-09-18T20:37:23.685-04:00Okay, okay, I PROMISE I will try to get the chapte...Okay, okay, I PROMISE I will try to get the chapters out in a more timely manner. LOL! You guys are relentless. I'm very pleased that you like it so much. <br /><br />I will also try to throw this up on fanfiction.net or something. I think you can get alerts when there is a new chapter. <br /><br />I also realize I'm a total fucking twat for leaving it the way I did. I can't help myself. I don't call myself a Jerkface for nothin'. ;)<br /><br />When I'm writing the character Bella I find myself really trying to put myself in her teenage shoes, especially when it comes to her feelings about her mom. It's kind of hard because, well, I'm not really like that, lol. <br /><br />Anyhoo, thank you for all comments!! I heart you guys. :)Jenny Jerkfacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15659204046693465182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-8216064942282295642009-09-18T20:11:24.303-04:002009-09-18T20:11:24.303-04:00Dear JJ,
I love you.
Sincerely,
Amy D
Seriousl...Dear JJ,<br /><br />I love you.<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />Amy D<br /><br />Seriously though, I have not read any of the 15 step before today. Don't ask why, but I deeply apologize. So today I read from the very beginning, needless to say it was a fan-fucking-tastic work day. You have some mad writing skills, and as much as I love you... well I sort of hate your jerkface for leaving us hanging in such sweet anticipation. But mostly I love you, in a very non-sexual non-stalker kind of way. : )Amy Dnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-41170855637277000432009-09-18T18:39:37.532-04:002009-09-18T18:39:37.532-04:00OK, JJ. I've finally gotten around to reading ...OK, JJ. I've finally gotten around to reading this and I have to say I love it! I groaned out loud when I realized that I was at the end! MORE PLEASE! I can't wait to see what is up with Edward and Rosalie! Will Bella be able to keep her cool and stay out of trouble? Don't answer these questions, just post the next damn chapter! (er...Please.)TwiWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03268537341656794886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-72548635218695019832009-09-18T16:44:16.209-04:002009-09-18T16:44:16.209-04:00I loved it JJ. I did have to re-read the first 6 c...I loved it JJ. I did have to re-read the first 6 chapters because it has been so long and I have read so many other fan fics lately and did not want to be confused. It was well worth reading it again!bierbeckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14293112293929447706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-82127390489671843682009-09-18T16:39:10.389-04:002009-09-18T16:39:10.389-04:00having an awful Friday and thought I would treat m...having an awful Friday and thought I would treat myself with a quick look at my favorite website. When I saw Chapter 7, I just Sqweeee. Some one stopped by to make sure I was okay. How do I explain I am better then OK, I got a new chapter so please leave me alone so i can read it.<br /><br /> Thanks for making my day a lot better!shopperlmnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-37963984540939709452009-09-18T16:23:13.304-04:002009-09-18T16:23:13.304-04:00I read all the chapters for the first time today! ...I read all the chapters for the first time today! Amazingly, I was able to coax my 8-month-old into an extra nap so that I could finish it!<br /><br />"It's as bad as the leg hitch in Eclipse" effing hilarious and so true! <br /><br />JJ I am definetly very pleased that you possess a vocabulary befitting of an adult, and are aware of adjectives other than "glowered"!!! Your story has taken shape beautifully, and I am looking foward to reading more! Please.....I'm begging you......hurry!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-34275437041515537872009-09-18T15:06:56.336-04:002009-09-18T15:06:56.336-04:00GAH! JJ! You do know I'm going to have to poun...GAH! JJ! You do know I'm going to have to pound on you for ending it there.<br />It's as bad as the leg hitch in Eclipse! <br />Fucking awesome chapter though. <br />Absoloutly LOVE your story and you neeeeed to update more often AND stick it on FanFic. I'm sure that A LOT of people over there would love it. Just look at the response from here :P<br /><br />VW: Mingl<br />I'm off to go mingl with the family. God help meZoomagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15027508006982366941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-12503303449926406372009-09-18T13:16:15.483-04:002009-09-18T13:16:15.483-04:00Oh the angst! Love it! And stop starting your c...Oh the angst! Love it! And stop starting your chapter with "This might be chapter seven but this is STILL my first attempt at writing fan fiction, so go on easy on me, okay? At least use a little verbal lube before you tear into me." Your writing is great! And I think if anyone attempted to tear into you - we`d give `em a smack down that would make what Lauren got look like a massage :)<br /><br />VW dising - There`ll be no dising of anyone writing here :)elainenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-51402570040503826612009-09-18T13:03:54.056-04:002009-09-18T13:03:54.056-04:00You suck, JJ, for ending it right there! Everythi...You suck, JJ, for ending it right there! Everything else is fantastic and dead on emotion wise, for me anyway. Please DO NOT DELAY with the next chapter!Twi-menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-70556640074682279112009-09-18T10:46:08.375-04:002009-09-18T10:46:08.375-04:00Yes, you certainly channel teen ansgst. Your Bella...Yes, you certainly channel teen ansgst. Your Bella's strangled frustration makes me want to cry. Chp 2 gave me a real lump in my throat after reading. But the real reason I want to cry is that I'm dying here to read more. More! & soon Plse!Plse! Love reading from you both!muvmnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-14029109049519426252009-09-18T10:22:51.614-04:002009-09-18T10:22:51.614-04:00Thank you for all your great comments!!
You can ...Thank you for all your great comments!! <br /><br />You can find all of Chapter 15 by going to the labels under our Zazzle/Cafe Press Merch links. I wish there was an easier way to do it on blogger but I can't figure one out. <br /><br />I wanted to keep the teen angst thing as real as possible and it sounds like I pulled it off, which makes me very happy. Either that or maybe I need therapy if I can channel teen angst that well, lol.<br /><br />Some people might be wondering why Edward and Rosalie seem to hate each other so much. Edward's got a secret. That's all I'm saying, lol. It'll come out soon enough. ;)<br /><br />And I am sorry that it's taking me so long in between chapters. I know how frustrating that is. I will definitely try to get the next chapter out soon-ish.<br /><br />@Track 10 - love the quote! Thank you! <br /><br />@MaggieMay - it is very much like posting a naked pic online. I was hesitant to do this but STY really encouraged me and I'm glad she did. :)Jenny Jerkfacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15659204046693465182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-17524370248531673002009-09-18T10:11:50.040-04:002009-09-18T10:11:50.040-04:00LOVE it! Is there a place where I can find all 7 c...LOVE it! Is there a place where I can find all 7 chapters in one spot?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-34503741865838604112009-09-18T08:35:08.863-04:002009-09-18T08:35:08.863-04:00Gah! Well I just read the whole 7 chapters in one ...Gah! Well I just read the whole 7 chapters in one sitting as I couldn't stop. On sexy rebel teen Edward, and wow - a great angsty, ballsy Bella, and gosh if she doesn't strike a chord with my long-buried late-teen self... it feels all so very raw. And the open-door bedroom scene in chapter 6 with the thigh-highs brought back some febrile memories too. Wooooh, that was HOT-t. But what a tease you are ending chapter 7 on this note!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12123686614612629476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-6497802998779811442009-09-18T08:19:23.667-04:002009-09-18T08:19:23.667-04:00It's about time! Don't take so long betwe...It's about time! Don't take so long between chappies!! Edward was pretty harsh, but we forgive ;-)BR549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-2657426537555048232009-09-18T06:59:02.789-04:002009-09-18T06:59:02.789-04:00loved it!!!! :-) This Edward is an ahole but Im gu...loved it!!!! :-) This Edward is an ahole but Im guessing theres more to the story. Can't wait to read more :-)Nettihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04680468264053755606noreply@blogger.com