tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post8211455330826690053..comments2024-03-26T05:24:56.783-04:00Comments on TWITARDED: Osa Bella - Chapter 12 "Don'ts" [Twilight FanFiction]Snarkier Than Youhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10797449606526868507noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-86773481303547584472010-06-11T22:29:31.091-04:002010-06-11T22:29:31.091-04:00This chapter was SO intense yet SO frustrating!!! ...This chapter was SO intense yet SO frustrating!!! That ending, aghhh!!!<br /><br />@dangrdafne, I love what you said about how both relationships are healthy /and/ unhealthy for Bella. Course I want her to be very very bad with Sailward, lol!<br /><br /><i>He smelled as though he was made of cold winter air and the deep sea and tall trees in summer and the night sky</i> ome, I can taste him after reading this...heavenly description; <b>perfect</b> Edward!<br /><br />I'll be stalking osa Bella tomorrow... Looking forward to moreeee Myg!Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01027538044608932823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-1694342501850624632010-06-11T20:11:45.861-04:002010-06-11T20:11:45.861-04:00~I buried my face in his shoulder and tried to jus...~I buried my face in his shoulder and tried to just breathe but he smelled so good it made me want to do terrible things. He smelled as though he was made of cold winter air and the deep sea and tall trees in summer and the night sky.~<br /><br />I love this story, and I really loved that^. Very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-19263940056870862722010-06-11T19:07:31.786-04:002010-06-11T19:07:31.786-04:00". . .quiet insistent drones of longing. . . ...". . .quiet insistent drones of longing. . . " What a fucking evocative phrase! I loved Reckoner before and now I'll always associate it with Edward. For better or worse. Probably worse. Lovelovelove this story, Myg!!!!!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-23428060323906548092010-06-11T12:19:00.814-04:002010-06-11T12:19:00.814-04:00First FF I've read...LOVE IT!!! MORE, MoRE NO...First FF I've read...LOVE IT!!! MORE, MoRE NOW!!dotnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-67683427765738201952010-06-11T04:24:46.356-04:002010-06-11T04:24:46.356-04:00Myg - you're a fucking legend.
Holy cock-teas...Myg - you're a fucking legend.<br /><br />Holy cock-tease, batman! I lurves me some hot and heavy sailboat action...<br /><br />Keep up the awesomeness and roll on Saturday for two chapters of more Sailward goodness.<br /><br />Seriously, you're awesome :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-34139806048656474052010-06-10T22:36:40.234-04:002010-06-10T22:36:40.234-04:00You're a great writer, Myg. When you finish t...You're a great writer, Myg. When you finish this -- IMMEDIATELY, please -- I hope you have some more of your own stories up your sneaky little sleeve so you can make a ton of money and a movie deal or five...shipstressnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-20057222220670613622010-06-10T15:26:29.861-04:002010-06-10T15:26:29.861-04:00Seriously??
I never figured our lovely Myg for su...Seriously??<br /> I never figured our lovely Myg for such an evil cock blocker!!<br /><br />I can not add any more than has already been said...<br /> Mama Cougar<br />Muffin Top<br />Cullenary Curser<br /> Dangrdafne<br />and<br />red_bella<br />all got here before me and said it much better than I could have!<br />Holy fucking blue twat is right. <br /><br />You are KILLING me!!<br /><br />@TexasKatherine ~ Really?? <br />I would have never figured you to ever even think about putting the breaks on! <br />Who knew there were morals somewhere in that twisted mind of yours!<br />I'm conflicted ~ I was sure you were as devoid of that shit as I am! <br />I still love you <br />(all of you)<br /><br /> Much love ~ GinnyGinnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06866050925962207913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-48505647555461552042010-06-10T14:11:38.155-04:002010-06-10T14:11:38.155-04:00OK..OK..Purple Cupcake told me I needed to read th...OK..OK..Purple Cupcake told me I needed to read this fan fic...so now I have read 12 chapters in one morning and I am hooked! Hooked like a crack whore on her knees ready to give $5 blow jobs to get another hit. Fuck me! Write woman! Write!Betty Pink Buttercreamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14672466474883848331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-87474984209132518572010-06-10T12:40:29.310-04:002010-06-10T12:40:29.310-04:00You're fucking killing me Myg. Is it Saturday...You're fucking killing me Myg. Is it Saturday yet?Cullenary Curserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14425062244966101928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-89781363853967019742010-06-10T11:31:09.007-04:002010-06-10T11:31:09.007-04:00I still love your writing style, and I have no int...I still love your writing style, and I have no intentions of bailing, but this chapter frustrated me no end. Not just the awkward almost sex (although FML - I suffered headdesk after reading the boat scene), but Bella's indecision in general. It's pretty realistic, though, and not all flowers and love, so good on ya. Can't wait to read more!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05943902552573063174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-87806955561993164912010-06-10T11:09:41.224-04:002010-06-10T11:09:41.224-04:00I am so hooked on this story. I'm still blissf...I am so hooked on this story. I'm still blissfully in the dark about any plot twists. The UST is killing me. Killing. Me. Poor Derek. I hope he finds a nice girl to marry in the end. You know I love my lemons, but when E & B were in the stateroom I found myself softly chanting, "Don't do it. Don't do it." Thanks for not jumping the shark. The timing just isn't right. Yet. <br /><br />Thanks for the update, love. Can't wait to read the next installment.TexasKatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05903343384511999667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-92128435579026897362010-06-10T08:32:39.535-04:002010-06-10T08:32:39.535-04:00I squeed like a freaking fan girl when they were o...I squeed like a freaking fan girl when they were on that boat. When he grabbed her ass and lifted her up on to the counter, my vajayjay so started whistling a happy tune....<br /><br />By the time he carried her to the stateroom it was beginning to fully break out into song. And then....nothing. The song was over. The VJJ gave one last throb, a little whimper and then fell back into silence.<br /><br />Myg - for the love of my vajayjay, please give her something to sing about again. Silence is not golden, it's totally blue. Not even just a couple of lines????? Please????MrsMoonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-30636984905579893232010-06-10T08:16:21.751-04:002010-06-10T08:16:21.751-04:00I love you, Myg... but if I had balls, they'd ...I love you, Myg... but if I had balls, they'd be the color of Violet Beauregarde after finishing off Wonka's three-course dinner gum. HOLY FUCK! I love this story, these characters, the boat. The UST is KILLING ME! I need more... I need it now.sjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02759445727064325439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-77380060127545251772010-06-10T07:15:30.364-04:002010-06-10T07:15:30.364-04:00What a tease you are! I won't complain to much...What a tease you are! I won't complain to much though since I didn't actually think they would hook up so quickly.<br /><br />Excellent chapter! I didn't want it to end. I am really enjoying your characters and their story!! I can't wait to see how it all plays out!Smittenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08475758184529813506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-28025428701225133682010-06-10T05:30:45.752-04:002010-06-10T05:30:45.752-04:00Totally with @Mama Cougar! Holy blue twat!!!!!!!!!...Totally with @Mama Cougar! Holy blue twat!!!!!!!!! So fucking hot! She really needs to get rid of Derek! "It's been awhile" my ass!!!!! He didn't even put in the tip and he is a fuckin one minute man! Can not wait! Update soon!!!!!!Melissanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-36395101264504005342010-06-10T01:14:52.988-04:002010-06-10T01:14:52.988-04:00ohhh man. i need the rest of this to be posted now...ohhh man. i need the rest of this to be posted now. myg, save me from spontaneous combustion.<br />it is awesome, i can't wait for the rest!christyhttp://twitter.com/starrebellenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-86734676431847054542010-06-10T00:44:28.885-04:002010-06-10T00:44:28.885-04:00@Franki - total fucking win for use of the word &q...@Franki - total fucking win for use of the word "Shtupping" - LOVES!<br /><br />vw: poppical. Banner better fucking get it together so he doesn't lose his shit every time Bella wants to melt his poppical.Fooorkspimphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06595312034165893813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-74587546728535164052010-06-10T00:41:16.217-04:002010-06-10T00:41:16.217-04:00I can't even read the comments yet, too excite...I can't even read the comments yet, too excited- <br />MMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG<br /><br />I ADORE THIS STORY!!! Seriously. I will not lie to you. I was kind of skeptical at first. Guidance counselor Bella with student Edward? I was like, "Well, I'll give it a shot..."<br /><br />I AM SO FUCKING HOOKED. Seriously - I stayed up late specifically to read this when I got back from my epically long day. I can't put my finger on what it is, which drives me nutty, but you totally have me hooked. I love, love, love this story. You had me on the edge of my fucking chair, squirming at all the right parts! I may have actually "Eeeeeee!!!!"d out loud when they're on the boat...<br /><br />I wish I could provide some sort of coherent comment on this but the truth is just that I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. I can see that Dangrdafne above has made some lovely and also lucid comments, and I agree with her TOTALLY but I cannot seem to form my own thoughts at the moment - look what Sailward has done to me!<br /><br />I absolutely, positively cannot WAIT to read more. I'm working on my own fic at the moment (Toefunny will tell you that I'm not always this terribly incoherent) but every time I read your fic I'm inspired to go back and look at my writing with a more critical eye - you make me want to write better! I"ll let you judge for yourself when it's ready for prying eyes ;)Fooorkspimphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06595312034165893813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-55268133594009003832010-06-10T00:39:01.048-04:002010-06-10T00:39:01.048-04:00I'll go sailing with you when you get the boat...I'll go sailing with you when you get the boat!kintailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11804810525874407597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-74479767762796549672010-06-09T23:35:42.090-04:002010-06-09T23:35:42.090-04:00Wow
Honestly that is all I have right at the mome...Wow<br /><br />Honestly that is all I have right at the moment. I need to take some breaths...<br /><br />"There was a tenderness in his voice that wrapped itself around my heart and held it so gently I nearly shed full tears." Beautiful<br /><br />The scene of them kissing had my heart pounding from fear and passion. What a combination. I could actually feel Bella's confusion - her terror and her want. It was glorious torture to read.<br /><br />I don't want to forget the Derek part though. I like that he is honest and that he is real and human (so opposite Edward obviously). I love that it is the relationship Bella "should" have, it is an excellent antithesis to her Edward relationship. How both can be healthy and unhealthy for her at the same time is what makes it all tick and they way you write it is just right.<br /><br />Thanks for a great chapter. I feel like I have lots to think about after reading this chapter.Dangrdafnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04940599664505953044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-43488861949112018112010-06-09T22:59:59.908-04:002010-06-09T22:59:59.908-04:00NOOOO!!! I REALLYYYY didn't want that chapter...NOOOO!!! I REALLYYYY didn't want that chapter to end...so hurry up and write some more.Pollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16641613109106261804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-39261157071539477652010-06-09T22:51:30.276-04:002010-06-09T22:51:30.276-04:00wait a second here--at the beginning of the makeou...wait a second here--at the beginning of the makeout session, she says "his lips were so hot" or warm or whatever, but that Sailward is a vamp tease, no?<br /><br />I'm confused...<br /><br />My blue twat totes thought they were gonna go for it, we are both sad.<br /><br />Derek is such a choad, I mean really, seriously? A two-pump-chump? In her hand? And he didn't even reciprocate for her? What a righteous pig! Ok sorry if I offend anyone here, but that is just totally like a religious zealot for you--they'll let you get them off real quick cause they're about to explode, but then it's all guilty conscience and "maybe we should stop" and "I'll introduce you to my parents next time"<br /><br />-steps off soapbox-<br /><br />sorry Myg, you know I adore this shit<br /><br />but dang it silent Edkins and gizface Derek make me maaaaaad<br /><br />poor Bellsalot feels so guilty, little does she know<br /><br />what will it take for Ediebrikel to tell her of his vampepicness? perhaps being saved by a-wait for it-BEAR? I can't f-ing wait!<br /><br />word up bitches!!<br /><br />Myg, you rock the party that rocks the bodym474https://www.blogger.com/profile/09106316010662984635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-43960713650253385742010-06-09T21:41:14.146-04:002010-06-09T21:41:14.146-04:00MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!
Loved it Myg...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!<br /><br />Loved it Myg...Care_o_lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12979308223185798717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-19337155870717249912010-06-09T21:24:15.645-04:002010-06-09T21:24:15.645-04:00Dying here, Myg! She has just got to dump Banner ...Dying here, Myg! She has just got to dump Banner soon and sail off into the sunset with Edward, who is obviously not truly 17 years old! Can't wait for the next installment!!Ninja TwiNerdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17590600890810669818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-52447941378945364352010-06-09T20:32:33.477-04:002010-06-09T20:32:33.477-04:00Oh man, you guys. Holy fucking blue twat is right....Oh man, you guys. Holy fucking blue twat is right. This is me with a gag over my mouth from Mr. Myg (he's kinky like that) no, seriously, I have a big big mouth and don't want to inadvertently spoil anything. <br /><br />@Lindsay Rae, I'm so glad you enjoyed the sailing description. You haven't lived until you've been nailed by the love of your life on the water. Just sayin' you should all put that on your list of places to do the nasty before you die. <br /><br />Thank you all times a billion for the very generous compliments here. Makes me all misty, I am serious.<br /><br />You'll get two Chapters on Saturday, yes. If you keep this kind of ego fondling up you're going to drag the entire thing out of me before the month's over. <br /><br />@Mama Cougar - Sailward for the WIN. Totally love that.Myg (Mercy Brown)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05327787947240499666noreply@blogger.com