tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post83527984557852944..comments2024-03-26T05:24:56.783-04:00Comments on TWITARDED: Osa Bella - Chapter 6 "Hunter" [Twilight FanFiction]Snarkier Than Youhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10797449606526868507noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-32934815413743026282011-04-29T10:47:00.982-04:002011-04-29T10:47:00.982-04:00I can't wait from Saturday.... Yup I'm ad...I can't wait from Saturday.... Yup I'm addicted! Bears hmmmm Cullens as bears interesting, it could still be the other tribe that migrated to the coast... Either way I can't wait to read more!red_bellahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04643896155215594362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-51342896848681927512010-05-31T16:20:14.800-04:002010-05-31T16:20:14.800-04:00I like that Jake isn't the puppy dog and it...I like that Jake isn't the puppy dog and it's Bella (mistakenly) kinda chasing him in this story. But really as long as Jake doesn't fall in love with B & E's daughter I'm happy!! Lolll<br /><br />Oh and I love what you've done with mike newton lolllSpinningHeadnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-34611040089120834492010-05-31T11:18:18.914-04:002010-05-31T11:18:18.914-04:00@Myg - ooooh! Man, I can't wait to find out w...@Myg - ooooh! Man, I can't wait to find out what that's all about!! I was going to say, I'm sort of sad that Jake is such a jerk in Osa Bella because I have a big soft spot for him, but now I'm paying more attention!Fooorkspimphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06595312034165893813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-91732628696790568122010-05-30T22:44:23.664-04:002010-05-30T22:44:23.664-04:00@spinninghead I had to make a comment regarding th...@spinninghead I had to make a comment regarding the canon and Jake. Well, some of Osa Bella is true to canon and some isn't, as you shall see, but while Jake and Bella's re'ship is a bit off canon, there are reasons for it. This is mostly because Bella doesn't move back to Forks until she's 26 and he's 24 and he's not the puppy dog anymore, so to speak, and I'll leave it there because if I say more, I'll spill too much! But I will say, it's also probably more in line with canon than is apparent at this point.Myg (Mercy Brown)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05327787947240499666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-92033450603614302162010-05-30T22:29:06.237-04:002010-05-30T22:29:06.237-04:00Jake's disinterest in Bella is pretty hysteric...Jake's disinterest in Bella is pretty hysterical, considering the canon! <br /><br /><i>"What did you think of the meeting?"<br />"Interesting," he said. "I learned a lot." </i><br />ha! I beat he did...especially if he read Banner's thoughts!!<br /><br />I kind of like the idea of the bears protecting the people (from the vamps? For the vamps?), and how sweet that the rarest of them all chooses Bella.... Yeah I'll tell Edward my theories any day, too!SpinningHeadnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-38705847411726604302010-05-30T14:39:28.817-04:002010-05-30T14:39:28.817-04:00Ohhh, I see. It's like when you get your firs...Ohhh, I see. It's like when you get your first batch of drugs, and they give you the good shit to hook you and keep you as a customer (5 chapters), but when you go back for more, they give you the weaker shit (1 chapter), but you don't care because the first time was SO good. So you start tweaking for the good shit, and it's not that the second round wasn't good, it was just one of those "first high chases" or something. Yeah? <br /><br />This was an awesome, awesome chapter. I love the research, I love that Edward wants to come and play with the bears, and I <i>love</i> that we might see Bella getting into trouble for going on a pseudo-date with a "17" year old student. Your DH may be a Creative Writing prof and a masta beta, but that doesn't mean you don't have sick talent all on your own. This is a great fic!Lindsay Raehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12533979763200935476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-43832077030251309172010-05-30T14:32:11.820-04:002010-05-30T14:32:11.820-04:00Just got turned onto this fic. Can't wait for...Just got turned onto this fic. Can't wait for the next installment. I too am very interested in what is causing the bears' behavior. I am also intrigued as how you will handle the relationship with Edward and Bella moving forward. Not just because of the age difference (I know - Eddie is "other") but also her role as a counselor. Considering Bella's mental state is a little fragile, I wonder how she will deal with a small community's disapproval.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-71105165009605496002010-05-28T23:13:00.871-04:002010-05-28T23:13:00.871-04:00I just totally ran across this and am wondering wh...I just totally ran across this and am wondering where the hell I have been that I didn't see it sooner! Someone smack me (and I call myself a twi-fan) shit I can't wait for tomorrow!!! Way awesome I love it so far..<br />Cami<br /><br />You Rock!!Camishelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17593854553751649926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-57015211050087081552010-05-28T19:17:30.800-04:002010-05-28T19:17:30.800-04:00Man, I guess a Wednesday/Saturday schedule will be...Man, I guess a Wednesday/Saturday schedule will be survive-able! I just want to tell you, from what you have given us so far, I'm expecting to be desperate for each new chapter. I've read a lot of FF in the last 8+ months and seldom feel compelled to comment. Maybe it's because of where you're posting... it just feels more normal to put in two cents here... so here's mine!<br /><br />I LOVE the twists you've made... the bear mystery, the older Bella (giving that extra taboo to the relationship), that Alice and Rose seem not as guarded as the Cullen's have before, it's all familiar but with enough new to really keep you wondering...<br />Your writing is so smooth and that great tension between B&E seems to materialize magically out of your easy prose.<br /><br />I can't wait until tomorrow... and this coming Wednesday... and next Saturday... and... well, I think you get the picture!!! always.in.the.meadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17683036361546308909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-9344267038487592122010-05-28T18:53:16.976-04:002010-05-28T18:53:16.976-04:00What is this thing on my face? Oh yeah, a shit-eat...What is this thing on my face? Oh yeah, a shit-eating grin the whole time I'm reading!<br /><br />More, more, more!!!<br /><br /><br /><br />CherylMomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14942997090268255904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-45099668862977355832010-05-28T14:52:13.494-04:002010-05-28T14:52:13.494-04:00Myg!!! I am LOVING THIS. I am totally hooked! I ...Myg!!! I am LOVING THIS. I am totally hooked! I didn't have time to get into it until this morning and now I cannot WAIT for your next chapter!<br /><br />The scene on the boat - the sexual tension - amazing! How do you DO that?? :)Fooorkspimphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06595312034165893813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-714473825996086022010-05-27T16:25:38.569-04:002010-05-27T16:25:38.569-04:00I can't wait from Saturday.... Yup I'm ad...I can't wait from Saturday.... Yup I'm addicted! Bears hmmmm Cullens as bears interesting, it could still be the other tribe that migrated to the coast... Either way I can't wait to read more!red_bellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04643896155215594362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-13210932348983497042010-05-27T15:57:34.251-04:002010-05-27T15:57:34.251-04:00I'm excited at how often you'll be updatin...I'm excited at how often you'll be updating. This story is pretty intriguing. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. And I'm already stuck in a daydream about sailing away, all by my onsie. So thanks for that! ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05943902552573063174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-50059383844456101262010-05-27T07:35:58.081-04:002010-05-27T07:35:58.081-04:00@franki I am so glad you want to keep reading! And...@franki I am so glad you want to keep reading! And, yup, bears! Oh dear!<br /><br />@dangrdafne I think "We always want what we think we can't have" really does it all up. It sums a lot more than Osa Bella up for me...<br /><br />@LKW What can I say? You've got nothing to be jealous of. I read you every other day and you gots gobs of talent, girl. I also recommend smoking your crack. Less messy.<br /><br />@Twilight Junkie @MCM It makes me skippy when people tell me they're addicted to this. I swear to keep everyone well and steadily supplied until we call it a wrap. And as for good sexing? ... Oh, sorry, my editor just slapped some duct tape over my hole. Not that one. The pie eating one.<br /><br />@bigbib There should be some career for us who want to read and toil in smut all day, that doesn't involve being porn stars. Because I don't want other people to watch. But that's just me.<br /><br />@Cullenary Curser: Edward is a bear?! WHAT? omg... ;-) Hey, I'm not gonna spill it that easily. I need a few cosmos first. Please keep reading and all will be revealed in due time. Though, I keep hearing the Precious saying,<br /><br />"I want to hear your theories."<br /><br />Edward baby, I've got theories I want to lay on you. Trust me.<br /><br />@Ninja Twinerd Glad you think so! I tried to make this fairly original in the world of Twifics, though I confess I am not real well versed in them, afterall there's something like 11,000 stories on fanfic.net alone... I purposely have not allowed myself to read much fanfic because I was afraid I'd inadvertently rip someone off! I am looking forward to diving in soon.<br /><br />@Nan Wednesday/Saturday posting schedule. Promise. I love meeting folks here with the mental health background! I am a clinical social worker myself, so, *cough* I'm not saying I ever met an Edward in my work, and good fucking thing! I don't know how any of us would manage that one.<br /><br />@VitaminR smoochies and hugs. Thanks for the hand holding and cheerleading, you know I need it.<br /><br />@Kerri 4am! What are you, me? I cannot speak about some of your questions at this point, but man I do love hearing the different theories. All will be explained, promise, in due time. And thanks for the kind words.Myg (Mercy Brown)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05327787947240499666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-32220286728726145072010-05-27T03:43:30.588-04:002010-05-27T03:43:30.588-04:00Im so glad I checked this blog before I went to be...Im so glad I checked this blog before I went to bed. Myg, this is so friggin interesting. I love the bears! Are the Cullen's vampires in this story? Edward certainly acts all nervous at the mention of LaPush. So... whats up with that? Are the Quiliuete's calling the bears for protection?<br /><br />Can't wait for Saturday! You have a special talent for making Bella and Edwards interactions very charged. You can cut the sexualtension with a knife! Oh, and I love how Edwrad is already getting jealous of other guys.<br /><br />Alright, enough of my 4 am ramblings. Im such an insomniac.Kerrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17068190359325445987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-32237835607053336662010-05-27T01:54:55.167-04:002010-05-27T01:54:55.167-04:00@Myg You rock!!! I get all second-hand excited fo...@Myg You rock!!! I get all second-hand excited for you every time I see parts of this story posted. Love it.VitaminRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168002453820589518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-39360043896397280962010-05-26T23:02:42.954-04:002010-05-26T23:02:42.954-04:00Oh my God, For your own sake it's a perfect ti...Oh my God, For your own sake it's a perfect time you post it because I was about to make a vodoo doll of you if you wouldn't haven write by tomorrow.<br /><br />I'm a psychologist and I have a friend like this Bella so I'm totally feeling her. Even the relation with someone younger (not illegally young).<br /><br />It's awesome so I'm expectong to read more chapters ok?<br /><br />NanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-72145448236406277892010-05-26T22:53:41.063-04:002010-05-26T22:53:41.063-04:00Wow! Can't wait for the next installment!! V...Wow! Can't wait for the next installment!! Very interesting - wonder what the bears are up to. I like how this fic is different than most of the ones I've read and the oddness of the Bella/Edward pairing.Ninja TwiNerdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17590600890810669818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-6800679418615448782010-05-26T22:47:32.372-04:002010-05-26T22:47:32.372-04:00I wish to spout theories. Well okay, just one:
1...I wish to spout theories. Well okay, just one:<br /><br />1)Edward is a friggin' bear! <br /><br />Dude, did you make the Cullen family bears? 'Cause if so? I may puffy heart you even more!<br /><br />Is it Saturday yet? Now? No? How about now? No? Okay. Fine. I'll wait :)Cullenary Curserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14425062244966101928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-10389715907117268882010-05-26T22:34:35.927-04:002010-05-26T22:34:35.927-04:00I am totally addicted to this story. Its new and i...I am totally addicted to this story. Its new and interesting!MCMnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-70378439444741815212010-05-26T22:27:45.794-04:002010-05-26T22:27:45.794-04:00Damn you whores for introducing me to fan fic. I n...Damn you whores for introducing me to fan fic. I never get sleep anymore and hopefully I won't get fired because all I do all day is read smut. There are just to many great stories out there.<br /><br />Although I will probably go into a depression when MotU ends :(bigbibgammillnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-14603590698815466892010-05-26T21:55:09.370-04:002010-05-26T21:55:09.370-04:00More please. Like I needed another crack-fic. It...More please. Like I needed another crack-fic. It's awesome - I love it & keep it coming. <br />I'm hoping there's some good sexing to come - I'm gonna miss MoTU.Twilight Junkiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09649065539885582179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-34584187453972795012010-05-26T21:49:31.564-04:002010-05-26T21:49:31.564-04:00Oh Myg how I love you so!
This story is like cra...Oh Myg how I love you so! <br /><br />This story is like crack to me now... I need it. I need to put it in a spoon, toast it over an open flame, suck it up into a syringe and blast it into my veins! <br /><br />You're a very talented writer... I am green with envy!sjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02759445727064325439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-30854240125146730032010-05-26T21:41:43.889-04:002010-05-26T21:41:43.889-04:00"...the one you get when you feel like the st..."...the one you get when you feel like the stars are aligning in some meaningful way. It was the exact feeling a girl gets when someone inadvertently mentions the name of her crush." Or someone mentions that a chapter of Osa Bella has posted :)<br /><br />Great background information on the bear story. Can't wait to see where we go.<br /><br />I guess this could be the tag line to the story: "We always want what we think we can't have."<br /><br />Looking forward to Saturday ;)Dangrdafnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04940599664505953044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3325136241555317156.post-35585792128900716622010-05-26T21:19:39.841-04:002010-05-26T21:19:39.841-04:00Excellent story and well written!
The morning aft...Excellent story and well written!<br /><br />The morning after I read chapters 1-5 I woke up excited to read more but then sadly realized that Osa Bella wasn't a book on my nightstand that I could pick up whenever I wanted. Hmmph!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing such a great story with us! <br /><br />Edward and Jacob and bears, oh my!frankihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04944291875796343384noreply@blogger.com